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"Don't Be Too Hasty" 4Koma Mini-Comic
🕑 Added 2024-04-02 06:49:14 +0000 UTCEDITED 05/29/24: Slight update to tag the name of the previously unnamed character. (Sierra Deschene)
Zylus convinces Xan to join him on a trial tour of a nudist club, but things didn't go as they were hoping. Luckily, they find another reason to stick around for a little longer.
The full 4Koma is the real comic/punchline with the fifth panel of the girl's reaction being unrelated to the joke.
Each individual panel is attached to this post, in their original 4K.
I did something different this time. Seeing as how Pixiv likes to throw a fit whenever "bathing suit parts" are revealed, and I didn't want to shit up a 4Koma with inconsequential mosaic filters, I thought "what if I staged an alternate version of the comic where the censorship was controlled by my camera angles and item placement? I call it the "Hold the Sausage (and Clam) Edition" Same comic, same jokes, and I can post it to Pixiv without dumping distracting pixel vomit all over the panels.
I only did it for this one as a bit of a joke (and it would have made for a fun AFD joke, without context) but it wasn't super easy to do, and it won't be usable on comics where futanari and their gifts are the focus (Like another 4Koma idea I have).
This comic is also "based on a true story". I was touring a nudist colony in Arizona after finding out how close it was to where I was staying. It was mostly filled with middle-aged and elderly men, and they were very talkative. I only walked around a bit feeling incredibly awkward, until I figured I should head back, when a woman that looked almost exactly like the girl in the comic walked out of a camping trailer and toward the pool area. (Obviously, I based the character's look on her, specifically her skintone, hair color and body shape) So, like the comic's punchline, I was pretty much "Guess, I can stick around for a little longer."
I was still too chickenshit to talk to anyone, though.
As for the new girl entering the canon? I like her design a LOT and she came out looking amazing, but I purposely didn't even name her. I still find myself giving her snippets of backstory while telling myself to shut up. She's a foul-mouthed American biker chick from Arizona, and that's where I'm leaving it for now. I still have too many unaddressed canon characters to sort through, and I know there's a few others I'll need to add. I guess it will all depend on the reception to her.
