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CYOA #5: BIGSTARS, PART 4 (+ MELON/GOSHA POLL)
🕑 Added 2024-09-22 08:03:47 +0000 UTCHere we go! Next time, we close out this first arc/bracket with an end-cap chapter!
For now, though, we're doing something a bit more fun and wacky, as Bill's attempt to set the cocky newcomer Pina straight go...not as planned,' meanwhile, the news starts to catch wind of more and more emerging giants! >.> Can the school keep any of them under wraps from the media, at all!? More naughtiness abounds here, so watch out!
I threw in an extra gift near the end to sweeten the pot (and because once I thought of it, I had to do it), but I think I figured out how to keep it plugged in with the narrative-in-progress! Plus, it kind of paves the way for potential size leaps in the second bracket <3 (And yes, there is a reason why some sizes are greater or lesser--we'll get to that soon enough!)
After this it's time for the big throwdown, as Gosha and Melon go/grow head-to-head! Will the bestest grandpa clobber the cruel hybrid, or will Melon outgrow the patch!? That's entirely up to y'all! <=3
I know who I would pick, but again, I'd enjoy both getting hugest, so have at it, and have fun!
--Dh
Comments
Mr. McTIM
Oh boy. This one's likely going to end up as a "Clash of the Titans" story. The Veteran Fighter vs. the Hysteric Hybrid. This may be bigger than the actual growth itself. And this is before Yahya gets added to the mix. At least, as far as I know.
Dnapalmhead
Oh, yeah, absolutely, I dunno anyone who just unilaterally loves everything anyone does, we all have tastes and degrees ^.==.^ Besides, if anyone actually disliked the experience as a whole, they wouldn't come back anyway (understandably, too) X3
Blizzard Wuffy
I appreciate you taking my light criticisms as such. Something like that is just my opinion anyway and doesn't really matter much I don't even know why I say it haha. I feel it would be weird for me to like 100% of the things you produce considering how much you do produce for us! I very much appreciate that aspect that you put out enough content that if there's a part I don't like, there's always something fresh right around the corner :)
Dnapalmhead
I feel you, not everyone is going to be for everyone <3 I'll try and make it as fun as I can, nonetheless! And thanks ^.===.^
Blizzard Wuffy
Not really vibing with Gosha as a character in this particular type of story, but this whole series has been fantastic regardless! Cheers!
Ryuakira
Yes, Mega Gosha please XDD And yeah its paying off bro, all that chapter re-reading has shown in these stories ^^
Dnapalmhead
I have my biases too, yeah >> I'm happy with massive Melon, but Gargantuan Gosha I'd not hate even more X3 But it's fun seeing these pingpong, I like that we have mixed wants here, more exciting! And yeah, I read back through manga chapters and constantly wiki their bios X3 Glad it works out, and that you enjoyed, bro!
Dnapalmhead
I certainly do understand--big boomin' Gosha is worth pressing for! Or into >/////>
Ryuakira
Another amazing chapter bro! Sure have been analyzing how these characters act because man have they all been spot on. I’m sure that sounds like it shouldn’t be that hard, but it’s one thing for them to be themselves in art compared to a story where you write how they act, think and behave. You’ve really nailed their personalities down to a T bro <3 And the wonderfully detailed growth descriptions, massive cherry on top X////P <3 Gosh I hope Gosha wins and ends up bigger, but…that’s a massive bias X///3
Vadric
In a better world, this would all be the final arc of the show. Anyway, I will confess a bias here. I've got my fingers crossed for a serious grow-off on this one. I'd love to see Melon getting outdone just by virtue of Gosha's experience. Then growth time! That killer instinct surges and Melon gets the upper hand, fueled by his lust for violence, whereas Gosha has become much more gentle in nature in his recent days. But then, Melon is gloating as he's pummeling, talking about everything he's going to do with this newfound size and strength. Then, *BOOM*, surge from good ol' granddad because he's still got that protective nature and he can't let himself allow a sociopath like Melon run rampant as a giant. Apologies for the pitch. It's up to the voters in the end! Guess I'm "campaigning" a tad. :P
Saatchi & Co
You’ve given me no reason to doubt you’ll do anything but wonderfully at this upcoming chapter!
Dnapalmhead
Holy guacamole, thank you ^.///.^ I like Bill, he lands on the right side of 'raucous blowhard' for me, so that's a relief to read! I'll do my best with our final fellas, too, here's hoping!
Saatchi & Co
When you announced this story series and listed the pairings, the first I was excited for was of course Melon. Next it was Pina and Bill and finally Legosi and Louis. You were spot on with the story for L / L. And I’m pleased to report the trend continues here. Pina and Bill was a delight to read. Pina’s character is really played up and the situations reflect it wonderfully. His fans being delighted at his appearance and getting involved, the teasing, the disbelief, all of it fantastic. I feel like you definitely played into the other side of Bill too. He’s all about carnivores being strong and not having to hide that, but he also cares. And his concern and anxiety shone through as he was going up against Pina. Masterfully done. As for the surprise at the end, definitely loved that. Nice to see just how things can progress in such a small amount of time. Bodes well for the upcoming rest of the stories. But for now I’m gonna sit back and ponder just how wonderfully you’re gonna do that Melon / Gosha scene. Even if the vote doesn’t pan out how I want it to, you’re gonna write something incredible. I just know it!
