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CYOA #5: BIGSTARS, PART 1 (+ HARU/MIZUCHI POLL)
🕑 Added 2024-08-30 08:16:44 +0000 UTCWhoopwhoop! Put in a little overtime and caught up on this part, after last weekend's wackiness at work! Planning (so far) on polling a few days, then trying to have part 2 ready to post by the Sunday after this, getting things back on the weekly track, if possible ^^
But yes, two big boys, coming up! We're coming out the gate swinging as the first bracket really starts up!
Down below is the poll for Haru VS Mizuchi! Again, I actually don't know how this one will go at all, but it's always super-fun seeing it happen!
**This time, I'm throwing in a POSSIBLE EXTRA OPTION for the ladies--Curvy expansion, OR Muscle growth! It'll be whichever of those two (per character) that gets the most votes, and those will still be weighed against one another, the same as it was for Legoshi/Louis (I changed his spelling to, you know, the correct one) >.> So, you could have both girls get highest numbers for Muscle, or for Curves, or one of each! Who knows!? Height and Hyper are surefires, though, the only split is for Muscle VS Curves**
So, while I know we're a mostly muscle bunch, if folks want to shake things up and go all curves, there's a chance to here! I swear, I've done non-muscle before! I saw it! XD
This will repeat for Cosmo/Juno, as well, so if there's vanilla here, muscle can still happen there, whichever. Like I typed, feel free to change stuff up! There's always the next bracket, anyhow!
Enjoy!! <3
Comments
Mr. McTIM
Wow. A "Curvy Expansion" option. Personally, between Curves and Muscles for Females, I'd always go for Curves. (But couldn't vote here at the time.) I'm more partial towards Curves for Females, Muscles for Males. Of course, I'd go for Hyper more for both genders. A little more for Hyper Females than Hyper Males, but both are high on my list.
Dnapalmhead
Thanks, bro! ^./////.^ It wound up clicking, thankfully, haha--Louis and Legoshi are both so growable, it kind of snowballed really quickly XD Glad it reads smooth, too, that's another relief!
Ryuakira
Huff…that sure was one hell of a read bro, such wonderful description and detailing, just from reading paints such clear images ^//////^ <3 And as mentioned, well done keeping the time line flowing so smoothly ^^
Chumlee99
The Hills have thighs coming summer 2027 *the poster is a massive thunder thighs woman looming over a town*
Dnapalmhead
The Bod Couple! Yeah, Louis is a lot, but also a deer, meaning I could grow a bulk buck. This became an inevitability. ^^ Glad to hear!
Dnapalmhead
Nothing wrong the Hills Having Thighs <3
Latrios (Coen van Haaster)
Oooh, great stuff~ Eagerly looking forward to the next part. I wasn't expecting Louis to grow too, but I'm not complaining~ :3
Chumlee99
I’m throwing my votes to curvy mainly because variety is the spice of life and sometimes you just wanna see a giant fat woman looming over all
Saatchi & Co
Nothing at work can be more important than a DNA Beastars fic update. That’s a hard fact.
Dnapalmhead
At work too, eh? Cheers! You can doo eet!
Saatchi & Co
Well, if it’s any consolation you really can’t see any evidence of flailing here! As for reading fast, I think it’s the spacing that does it? It’s easier to get through 27 pages of well-spaced out story than massive bulks of paragraphs at a time. Plus your time codes for the various events break it up nicely. So you feel like you’re making more progress because you’re checking off more ‘milestones’. There’s also the fact I’m at work and this is just what I needed to occupy my thoughts for the rest of the day and make it go super fast so I can get home and start making my own big Beastars stories, y’know? As Martha Stewart apparently once said, “It’s a good thing.”
Dnapalmhead
Thanks very much! I rarely know how the finer points will go until I'm already flailing around in the moment, but things start clicking into place eventually >.> Glad it works for you! Also, man do y'all read fast X3 Respect! Makes me glad, since I worry these might eat up a lot of time in reading
Saatchi & Co
You have such a way with words. The combination of growth and interaction with those around was such a visceral chop and change. Really felt like you were in the middle of it all. And honestly the timeline you’re building with this thing? Being able to map out the events as they happen across the shared chronology in each piece? Hats off to you, bud. We’re only two parts in and seeing that bit where Legosi gets the egg sandwich was great. The set up for future parts was great too and I am so excited to see what ends up happening between Mizuchi and Haru (even though I reckon it’s gonna be VERY obvious)!
