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Interlude - Reaching Out

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 21:52:21 +0000 UTC

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Clothman

I got the impression Blake was a rough any youngish man just about finding his way. Like a bird at the nest finding his wings. But then bang. The imaginable happens. Along with messed up survival stuff, that got under played on messed up development, possibly. But its hard to do, for many. Better story, this way, maybe. He's basically a kid, still. Most of his survival was luck, hope, or terror that gets buried. Building a big pile, so you leap from choppers and call it Tuesday, is another level of functional dysfunction. But, it worked. No idea where it goes. Nor does Blake, he just has a few ideas, from what he knew just as he started to stand still, and talk to people. But only because it was all ending, and he was, implied, expendable vs the other available fighters. Still around. So he got volunteered to go back. Still a dumb, traumatised kid, trying to remember 'important stuff', that's needed now. Adding to complication with each effort. While trying not to be the monster terror and exhaustion eventually led him too.

SwiftFate

Would definitely like that.. thing is, he HAS shown an inherent craftiness and intelligence from time to time. I just find it hard to believe that throughout TEN years of an apocalypse fighting for survival, even IF he was just a soldier following orders near the end of it, that he wouldn't pick up on how untrustworthy humans are, especially at the beginning where everyone and their mother is either trying to survive or gain an advantage. He also knows Rajesh personally and although they worked together, he should know he is selfish

John Doe

Also, remember that Blake is partially a product of his parent's world views. No offense to those sweet and gullible (Never talk smack about any man's Mama!) Petticoat Junction, Kumbaya hippies, but they not only produced Blake, they also created a wonderful co-dependency household for Blake's idiot, junkie brother to come of age in. Blake's Mom has a rather "special" passive/pacifist view of reality. It takes all kinds to raise a village (idiot), as a politician once wrote in a book. Heh! :-)

John Doe

I have no way to know, BUT, I desperately hope that Blake's recent conversation with Rajesh was an Intelligence Op. In a perfect world, Blake would know that mentioning the Engineering school students would make Rajesh isolate and secure those people. That way, they would have a better chance of staying alive AND be held in a central secure location. IF Blake were very smart (a huge if), this would turn the "trading alliance" missions into pre-rescue scouting missions for the engineers. I think that Jennifer is smart enough to plan this and put it into Blake's head. As for Blake coming up with this plan on his own...well, they say that even a broken clock is accurate twice a day. Heh! :-)

SwiftFate

Oh I agree, but the fact that he is so trusting despite literally struggling to survive and witnessing how horrible Humans can be is very much immersion breaking for me. He has stated it multiple times and even recognizes that fact but we kind of just skip over it and he just goes off and ignores that fact anyway.

John Doe

It is my "impression" that the author may in the past have taken issues with other authors who created smart, savvy "Mary Sue" characters who do "everything" right when thrust into this sort of genre. I imagine that Blake is suppose to reflect what would happen if a Blue Collar, High School Dropout who never paid attention to the world around him fell into a post apocalyptic scenario. In Blake's ALT future he barely seemed to think on a day to day basis. He had anger management issues, he went where he was told and killed what he was told to kill. Sort of like a 9 to 5 monster killing grunt. Hell, even the fact that he was chosen for this Time Travel Test was because he was pretty much the dumbest crayon in the box who was still alive. "Hey kid, we will give you this 10 year old Hershey's Chocolate Bar if you get in this machine. What do you say?" Heh! While I am not thrilled that Blake's greatest skill is thinking with his fists, It is Logical for the back story of the character. What would happen to your favorite knuckle dragging 18 yoa neighbor kid down the block with an I.Q. of 68 if he lucked out and survived D-Day with nothing more than a baseball bat? The Answer: "Blake". He ain't very bright, but he is mostly believable. :-)

Timothy Nugent

Also, he spent 10 years killing monsters, how does that make one smarter? He is also only 28 years old, mentally. My wife says guys don't mature until 35. Lol.

Timothy Nugent

I disagree. Blake is probably the best survivor/fighter on Earth. However, he has no experience in politics, leading, PR, or anything like that. He is going to have to learn that, which he will do.

Clothman

That's the purpose of his character. Also Blake doesn't entirely see who he's currently dealing with, because he remembers Raj as a different, who lived a different life. He doesn't yet quite realise why things went like they did, this time. He's expecting him to be aloof and 'difficult', that was how (as he saw it) his friend was. He doesn't realise the entitled instrumentalising contempt he has for everyone, but couldn't impose previously. Hive type cities like Raj wants may not so likely work out, long run. Besides, the kind of check mate zero sum mind set, sews plenty of seeds preceding a fall. Such as deciding to find and force surivors into his zero sum hive, and agreeing to trade (or will he decide to bait trade convey and hide behind engineers, betting on how much value they must have, when he realises stacking nano costs to reduce combat needs, bites into trade needs for conversion kits? No matter how it goes, Blake will eventually learn about it, and he will have to act, and zero sum game players with malignant bents, make sure it has to come down to conflict.

SwiftFate

My only issue with this story is that for someone who spent 10 years surviving an apocalypse, you consistently make Blake an absolute retard. Why?

John Doe

OoooooKay.... You do you, man. Enjoy this weekend. :-)

Undead Writer

Still hate Rajesh. Kill Rajesh camp grows with each chapter!!

Undead Writer

F RAJESH! KILL HIM!!! Why is our MC so stupid!

John Doe

Regarding Protagonist vs. Antagonist: Let's face it, in most fictional stories, a writer has to have at least one of each type of character. Some stories can work without an antagonist, but not many. That being the case, as a reader which would you prefer, 1. A stupid and illogical antagonist OR 2. An intelligent and rational (think Hannibal Lecter) psychopath/sociopath as your story's Bad Guy. Mr. Nugent is offering his readers Rajesh. We don't have to like him, but at least we can understand his reasoning for the rather selfish/sociopathic acts that he commits. I would rather read about "evil" that has a self serving reason for it's acts, than a cartoon villain who irrationally hates the protagonist and perhaps all of humanity. I think that we have all worked with a "Rajesh" at least once in our lives. We may not like him, but we can at least understand why he is the D*ck that he is. :-)

John Doe

Thank you for the Meaty Chapter! :-)


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