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Unintended Cultivator Vol 13: Chapter 3 – Appropriate Bearing

🕑 Added 2025-10-02 04:25:47 +0000 UTC

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Jeremy Young

I think sometimes Sen still thinks of himself as that orphan.

Newbie_101

I will put it another way - I do not think we are learning anything new about Sen or the world and nothing we care about is changing. I realize this is a bit extreme, but I would go as far as to cut everything from the Emperor's Bay except for the chapters about Zhu Fen and Sun Xue (chpt 58-60) and allude to the rest when describing how this city is being conquered. Maybe keep the alchemist chapter and Uncle Kho and Master Feng's arrival. Emperor's Bay was from Chapter 39-71 - almost half the volume and the challenges Sen faced were not all that different in terms of nobility and other cultivators, except for an emphasis on having enough food. But we already discussed that in the capital as well, with the greenhouses. We did not learn anything new about the spirit beasts. We did not learn anything new about Sen or his abilities. The army practice improvements were in the first half of the volume, not much changed in that second half (except for the alchemist chapter 48). Xu Xiao Dan’s tribulation was interesting, but it was more of a tease that Sen never gets to read his cool manual and I do not think we were too invested in whether Xu Xiao Dan succeeded or failed. I think the scenes with the magistrate were well written, but it was hard to be invested in a city I do not expect us to see again any time soon. Especially since we know there will be many more cities like it to come. The "think of what comes after" was a good conversation, but it did not require Emperor's Bay to happen and can happen/have happened any time. Again, this is probably an extreme view and part of it is that the war overall is a much drearier and darker tone for me, but I do feel that there should be advancement of character or power or war goals or relationships. I want to be able to look back and say - "Ah, this is now different and I care about it being different because I care about character X, etc" or "Sen tried to do something different and it failed and he learned something new or changed his perspective." But Sen is kind of saying the same thing over and over internally for a while now, so it does not feel like there is change or growth.

Ben Sheahan

I understand the tone of these war chapters is necessary, but Sen lamenting his situation for half of every chapter is getting incredibly tedious.

Zefira Shannon

dang, something about that pronouncement at the end really made it hit home. Sen has come a _long_ way from an orphan on the streets of Orchards Reach...


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