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Unintended Cultivator V10: Chapter 13 – Kingdom

🕑 Added 2024-09-17 21:59:57 +0000 UTC

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Marian Ch

Sen could and should absolutely fix the issue of sourcing basic crafting materials by himself. A mine is not something the town can afford to have anywhere outside the defensive walls right now unless you're willing to just write off all those lives because sooner or later they'll suffer the same fate as any other isolated group of people. ..which probably means they'll have some mine baseline humans will work in and get annihilated when beasts find them, isn't it?

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Eric Dontigney

There were probably more today than usual because I wrote this chapter during a migraine. I mostly focused on finishing it, rather than polishing it.

Kanyau

So after undergoing the most harrowing of heavenly tribulations, he must now face the great mortal tribulation of... Bureaucracy!

Tim Johnson

i assumed that was the case. I read the first 3 books on kindle then realized you were posting to RR then came here to get current. Your editor(s) did a fantastic job with the kindle publications and I dont think i even saw a typo on RR until like book 6 or something. I just always post when i see the quick and dirty ones that are easy fixes on other stories so its become a bit of a habit. Anyways, love the story and look forward to more!

Eric Dontigney

These are literal first drafts of these chapters. They go up as soon as finish writing them. They go through multiple rounds of edits and typo checks between when I post them here and there's a finished book. So, while I don't forbid people to point out the errors they see, I honestly tend to gloss over them because I know I'm going to review every chapter and so will a professional copyeditor, as well as professional proofreader.

Tim Johnson

I didn’t any thought to how to dismiss them. -> i didnt have any thought as to or on how to dismiss them. Also i saw on yesterdays you dont have anyone that looks over for quick edits until your publisher sees them. do you want people to point out quick edits?

Angela Roberts

Infrastructure, yeah? The bane of every leader. The unintended King.

Barbara Collier

Love this Arc!!!!

Eric Dontigney

Probably, except Sen has other, arguably more important things, to do than being a human strip mining operation.

CentaureHeart

Pretty sure Sen could mine a mountain in 1 minute once he finds it.

Bunny Waffles

Longish may he reign! (Before being forced to ascend)

Newbie_101

All Hail King Sen the Unintended!


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