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Unintended Cultivator V7: Chapter 47 – Academy, Part 5
🕑 Added 2024-03-12 04:23:22 +0000 UTCSoon Zi Rui’s heart still thundered in his chest as he fled from the training hall. Never before in his life had he been so casually suppressed by another person. It had been an astonishing display of raw, unknowable power that would have been even more impressive if it hadn’t been directed at him. He didn’t even have a name for what Judgment’s Gale had done to him, let alone an inkling of how the man had done it. That pressure had been all-consuming, like a mountain had taken a personal dislike to him, compressed all of its weight into one spot, and dropped it on him. It wasn’t just the incredible pressure, or the fact that he couldn’t breathe, but that his qi had been utterly stilled inside of him that had been so terrifying. He couldn’t have fought back. Not that fighting would have proven any kind of challenge for Judgment’s Gale. That much was obvious. Whatever that technique had been, it hadn’t taxed the man at all. He’d simply carried on talking with the others.
However, that pure inability to put up even a token resistance had shaken Soon Zi Rui to the core. He had been completely helpless, his life hanging on the whim of a living legend who was not legendary for his forgiveness. He’d been surprised, not to mention thankful, when he regained himself enough to realize that the crushing, existence-ending pressure had lifted. Not that he could really remember what happened at the end. Had one of the others intervened? Convinced the blue-robed titan to stay his wrath? Or had Judgment’s Gale simply lost interest? Soon Zi Rui just didn’t know and didn’t dare to ask. The insult had been stupid. He hadn’t thought about it. He’d just said it, the way he’d said similar things a thousand times before. Except, the other thousand times, it’d hadn’t been met with the instant arrival of death held in abeyance by only a hair’s breadth. He’d offered an apology because it was deserved, and also because he had no desire whatsoever to test the patience of that man a second time. Such a mistake could only lead to certain, dishonorable death.
For all that, he hadn’t been barred from entering the strange academy Judgment’s Gale meant to open. Even if Soon Zi Rui couldn’t receive direct instruction about cultivation, even learning about the sword or spear from the man would be valuable in ways that would last the rest of his life. It was a risk worth taking. He just needed to be mindful of his tongue. Ruthless. Implacable. Deadly. Those were the words spoken about the man, and he was exactly what Soon Zi Rui was expecting.
***
Mo Kai-Ming left the training hall in a daze of wonder. She stared down at the vial in her hands, almost refusing to believe it. The key to foundation formation, to a new world of possibility, a key that eluded her for years, now sat in her hands. She hadn’t known exactly why she’d sought out Judgment’s Gale. Mostly, it had been desperation. She’d tried a few times to join sects, but they all wanted people who could fight as well as cultivate. She’d never learned to fight and knew that it would never be one of her strengths. Physical size mattered less and less as cultivation progressed, but she was a qi-gathering cultivator. The lowest rung on a ladder that stretched to the impossibly distant heavens. They were expected to fight with swords or spears or other things she’d never so much as touched in her life.
What did a woman from a tiny village know about weapons? There had only been two bows in the entire place, both of them owned by the Ku family. Those hulking men had been the village hunters. They were stern and dutiful, but she would never have dared ask them to teach her to use the bow. She wasn’t sure she could have drawn one of them even after becoming a cultivator. It had been something of a game at the autumn festival for people to try their hands with those bows. She had watched grown men, men made strong by the backbreaking labor of farming, fail to draw those strings back. No, she had no business even trying. Not knowing anything about true violence, she’d tarried in her village long past the time her teacher had told her she needed to venture into the world to keep growing. The world was vast, though, and filled with dangers she did not feel equipped to face.
With each passing year, though, she’d felt something in her diminish. She didn’t know what, only later learning about the idea of momentum, but she felt it leaving. It was that mysterious, diminishing commodity she couldn’t name had finally forced her to leave, to seek out sects, and be summarily dismissed by them. It had been humiliation after humiliation. Mocked by those set to test applicants. Mocked by those in towns for her size. And when it wasn’t humiliation, it was attacks. She had learned about violence the hard way, and learned that everyone can drown if you try hard enough. When she’d had all but decided to return to her village, she started to hear strange stories about some impossible man. A righteous man who battled evil and cured the sick, working miracles with both blade and alchemy. She’d clung to those stories, the hope they gave her, and sought him out. She’d chased those stories for years and finally, finally, she’d found him, only to find herself hesitating. What if he said no? What if he mocked her? She’d been trapped in indecision until he took the decision from her hands.
Then, as if she was living in one of those fantastical stories, he had worked miracles before her eyes. Judgment’s Gale had come to her defense, chastised that other cultivator so severely for his mockery that she wondered if the man would ever utter another insult in his life. He had taken her aside, been so polite, and then crafted the elixir right in front of her. There was always some battered pot in the tales, although she hadn’t believed that part. But the stories were true! He had used a battered old pot to make something that was absolutely bursting with qi. Such a thing could have commanded a price beyond her life, and he’d just given it to her. All while casually telling her things about tribulations and affinities that no sect member or even other wandering cultivators would tell her. He’d even proven his words by using several types of qi in front of her. As if all that wasn’t enough, he’d promised to find her a wood cycling technique and even watch over her while she broke through. Kind. Generous. Honorable. Those were words used to describe him, and he was exactly what she expected.
***
Sua Xing Xing walked away from the training hall with only thought circling in her mind. What in the thousand hells did I just witness? She had come here filled with confidence. She had heard the stories. It seemed that everyone knew someone who knew someone who had met, or been saved by, or been killed by, or been blessed by Judgment’s Gale. Judgment’s Gale, the eccentric cultivation genius who wandered the land doing whatever he wanted and surrounded by powerful, beautiful women. It had been so obvious, so clear to her, that she had formally withdrawn her sect to come and find him. After all, with his reputation, why would he say no? She was powerful. She was skilled. She was beautiful, refined as she had been by cultivation. She was exactly what he looked for in companions. She had left her sect knowing that she would find him, be accepted by him, and stride in the wake of his greatness straight into the nascent soul stage. She had been so sure.
When she’d first arrived, Sua Xing Xing had simply assumed he would seek her out. He had to know she was there. She hadn’t done anything to hide her presence. So, she had waited. As one day turned into two, and days turned into weeks, her confidence ebbed. She felt him, sometimes, coming and going. Every time, her hopes rose, only to be dashed as that presence passed her by. Again, and again, and again. She’d been contemplating whether it was time to leave when he had walked into the common area of the inn, bathed in absolute assurance. When he had pointed at her, it had felt like lightning was coursing through her body. Finally, she had thought. That electrifying moment had been short-lived, as he had pointed at the other two hopefuls that had been staying at the inn. She hadn’t bothered to learn their names. Why would she? A qi-gathering cultivator and foundation formation cultivator? They were beneath her.
She had still been invited to join him, and any trivialities like other cultivators could be overcome easily enough. She would win him over. Except, that had failed utterly. Not only was he not impressed, at all, by sect cultivators, he had barely even looked at her, let alone been charmed by her beauty. If anything, he seemed annoyed by her presence. That series of revelations had made her blush in embarrassment. She had remained quiet, looking for a way to regroup, while the eccentric man described his plans to open an academy to train people with weapons. She couldn’t fathom why he would want to do such a thing. Then, that fool had tossed off an insult to the little qi-gathering cultivator and everything had changed.
Up until that moment, Judgment’s Gale had given off an almost feline quality of lazy indifference. The moment that insult left the foundation formation cultivator’s lips, the laziness vanished, and he was focused like a raptor. She’d felt what he did then, even if she couldn’t quite believe it. It was a complicated technique, the kind of thing that involved the soul, and she hadn’t believed that such things were even possible before the nascent soul stage. And he’d made it look easy. As that technique nearly ended the life of that insulting fool, the name Judgment’s Gale took on a new reality for her. She was watching as he passed judgment on someone, and it was, well, it was thrilling. It was also petrifying because it was very clear that he took all of what was happening for granted. Then, he dismissed them.
The foundation formation cultivator ran for his life, which Sua Xing Xing thought was an indication that the man might survive to see core formation. She had resolved to stay and see if she might find some other path into his good graces. Once again, he ignored her, choosing to speak with the little qi-gathering cultivator instead. Being in a room with that man was proving very hard on her self-worth. It was still a fascinating exercise, though, as he used the excuse of the insult to do exactly what he said he wouldn’t do. He provided the little woman with cultivation instruction, while simultaneous performing a feat of alchemy crafting that should have been impossible given the ridiculous pot and the absurdly short amount of time he spent on it. Even so, she could feel the strength of that elixir from across the room. She didn’t know how he had done it, but he had made that woman a cultivation resource that bordered on being too potent. He had been masterful, powerful, focused, and utterly uncompromising. He was not at all what she expected.
***
Sen took a moment to store his alchemy pot and restore the training hall to its original condition, then he turned and looked at a particular shadow.
“What do you think?” he asked.
Falling Leaf stepped out of that concealing darkness and looked toward the door.
“About what?” she asked.
“Should I let them join?”
“The man is a fool, but most men are. If you refuse to train foolish men, you will have few students. The little one will love you forever. I don’t know if that will make her a good student or bad student, but she’ll be a loyal student. The pale one—” she trailed off.
“Yeah,” said Sen. “She’s trouble. I’m just not sure what kind of trouble.”
“She has an agenda.”
“I expect that almost everyone who comes here will have an agenda.”
“True,” agreed the shadow panther, “but her agenda is you. She means to have you.”
Sen started to say something funny, but the words died on his lips when he saw Falling Leaf’s hands were balled into tight fists. They were balled so tightly that he saw blood dripping from them. She turned to look at him. There was something lethal, primal, and fundamentally inhuman in that gaze.
“She means to keep you.”
Sen considered that look for a moment before he answered.
“I guess she’ll just have to live with the disappointment of that failure.”
Comments
Conrad Manaugh
She cant turn into a cat again before boning sen
Revilo Straight
One day? What about right now? Think about all the bullshit he's done with that pot
Sanctum
That battered old pot will be a supreme artifact some day
Eric Dontigney
Yeah, it's almost like that jerk of a writer has intentionally vague-ified that relationship. Also, it's entirely possible that she doesn't know. She's still coming to grips to being stuck in that human form. She probably isn't spending that much of her time contemplating the exact nature of her relationship with Sen.
Magisch
I do wonder if falling leaf has romantic intentions for Sen herself or is just an overprotective older sister. Their dynamic is strange, I can see that going either way.
Codered999
To be fair, there's a difference between the casual sex he was having before with women that didn't seek to use their womanly wiles to control him and take advantage of him, and this specific woman that sought to use her womanly wiles to control him and take advantage of his momentum to get her own going.
Wes Brown
Hooray for Falling Leaf! I guess her previous, whats the word, ....her previous indifference to who Sen mates with did not survive the imperial city. Good good, much good. Also... it makes more sense why Fau Roulan is teaching Sen to Shadow Travel .... I mean. I don't think it's just because he has the aptitude any more. I mean I didn't ever really think that was the reason but....
Wes Brown
Uh yeah....her brother....Uh hu
Justin
It's pretty cool to see the lucky encounters from the other direction
Codered999
Falling Leaf doesn't appreciate when people look at her brother like he's something to conquer and own, she values personal freedom and would rip off the head of any who dared to think they could shackle and control her family.
Eric Dontigney
These books are 120,000 to 130,000 words on average and by design. I have a little leeway, but my publisher will get increasingly annoyed the longer I make them. So, yeah, I try to focus on key story-driving, plot-driving, character-development driving moments. That conversation would have been interesting on an academic level, but would have provided almost zero plot, story, or character development. At best, it might have resulted in one or two factoids about body cultivation making into canon. The reality is that if I tried to cover every conversation and point of interest in the depth that everyone wanted, these books would run 500,000 words each, and I'd have 26 fans.
luda305
Great. Thanks.
Derek Walker
Loved the alternative POVs. But this also made me wonder if anything came from Ma Caihong looking over Sen's body cultivation after the remark she made. I guess since it wasn't covered it wasn't that important.
Oskari Ponkala
Fantastic chapter!
Peter Baird
Falling Leaf is a very interesting character both in herself and regarding her relationship with Sen.
