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A Tinier Furry In A Huger World v0.1 Preview Seven
🕑 Added 2021-08-09 10:10:54 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Here's the planned update for A Tinier Furry In A Huger World! Because I've been dealing with commission backlog, this is a lot smaller than usual. For the most part, it just adds a couple of things to the disposal toggle!
CHANGELOG
Disposal toggle now works for the Hart AV segment. This is a scat burial thing
Disposal toggle now works for Reiko's OV segment. This is getting turned into sentient soul scat
Easiest way to see these is through the handy scene selector under Patreon Options on the main menu! (Hart's Command (AV) and Reiko Oral Vore - make sure to enable the disposal toggle when asked!)
A vast majority of the text in the intro has been reworked/proofed for better readability, including typo fixes, syntax changes, and, in some cases, complete overhauls
The new disposal scenes are pretty self explanatory ... but let me explain that last part of the changelog real quick!
I've done a pretty extensive overhaul of a big bulk of the intro text. This includes the conversation with the stablehand, the walk to the tavern, the tavern itself, and the two variations of walking up to Wilson. I did this for the most part because I needed something fairly low effort to do between working on commissions.
I do this pretty often (for both games) without making a big deal out of it, but, this was a fairly substantial overhaul (a vast majority of lines in the intro have been altered either slightly or substantially) so, I wanted to make it more apparent by showing everyone just a few examples!
BEFORE
AFTER
Altered to make the weather match how the town is described later. Also, I am really trying to reduce my use of em dashes on the whole, so, cut out a whole bunch of those too. Honestly, changing a bunch of statements surrounded by '-' from the text was amongst the biggest changes here
BEFORE
AFTER
Tried to create a better image of the tavern and removed a bunch of word repetition.
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AFTER
Completely changed all that waffle about Wilson and hopefully made something a little more appropriate.
Just three examples - of many, so many that I lost count - of the changes made to the game's intro script. Hopefully it reads read better! In my opinion it does at least. It will most certainly not be the final draft of things, but, as always, I'll keep working away on tuning it up as best I can. At least you know what I'm talking about when I leave that vague note in the changelog that says 'made the horny vore game read better'.
Also, of course ... the disposal endings! Enjoy those, too! Disposal is a bit of an unfamiliar niche to me, so, expect these to get better and better as I get used to the kink!
I will have another update for this in about two weeks time (or maybe a little more, depending! I'll have a more fixed date soon)
Should have a story for everyone in a day or two! Peace!
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