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(Memento Mori) Chapter 63: Step Two, Figure Out The Next Step

🕑 Added 2019-08-27 06:06:53 +0000 UTC

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Another one bites the dust! Thanks for the help as always!

Azurus Icewind

"There two lookouts posted at the front entrance of the factory." there "were" two lookouts "Two scarlett blades appeared " one too many t's in "scarlet" here "Casper turned countered with a thrust of his scarlett blades" "turned and countered" or just "countered" also you again, have another "t" in "scarlet" I'm beginning to wonder if I'm incorrect. "healed with the access blood floating around him." with the "excess" blood Well, we've caught up again, and I dunno how I feel about Casper letting these people go. They could easily report him and even with destroying camera's, he surely didn't identify every artifact or power these people have. I dunno, being so obvious I think is gonna harm him sooner rather than later. Anyway, keep up the good work, looking forward to another one.

Okay, I owe one more chapter set for tomorrow, along with some GoN.


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