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The Confession - Script - SPOILER! & Poll
🕑 Added 2024-07-20 22:19:41 +0000 UTCTL:DR - Script. Spoilers. Vote if you like it.
This is the script for the first video of a 3 part series. The video will be conveyed as a confession of sorts, read by the main character. The scenes play with sounds and talking, with a narration overlay in between the talking. The in-scene dialogue and actions are listed under the "in person" column. The narration is listed in the "in confession" column. Even though the text is in different columns, the order is read from top to bottom, line by line. To the left is a picture of the scene that would accompany the dialog.
Not exactly sure about the pacing, so we'll see how it goes. Highly likely to change. It's also written with werewolves in mind, but it can be adapted to other creatures. I'll have a poll soon for you all to pick the baddies.
I was going back and forth about sharing this. I think knowing the story ahead of time will spoil some of the fun, but I wanted to get feedback to see if this is going to work for the majority of you.
For those that don't mind having the surprise spoiled and want to give feedback, please do. For those that want to be surprised, don't read further.
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Comments
Ogirls Art
Why waste a good opprotunity? 😁
sami acbar
Unless he decides to follow her in one of the times she sneaks out watching it all happens and being surprised himself how it turns him on seeing her being ganged by werewolves. having hard time to accept it at first but in the end wanting to join in on the action
Ogirls Art
I was thinking something similar. The whole talking part makes it more interesting but much harder. How to sound hot but not cheesy. But yeah, in the end, everyone's happy. Except the poor boyfriend.
Bbk1
one thing you could do, after the first creature cums in/on her, she gets a "taste" of it... and then decides she wants more... so then she begs for the other creatures to fill up her holes... she can (shyfully) admit that it feels good to be "filled up"... and as the scene progresses she gets more and more eager and excited and finally very happy and satiated :) and then the future episodes can be the woman sneaking out at night to satisfy her new hunger ...
Ogirls Art
Heck yeah! Never gets old.
Bbk1
face down azz up that's the way I like to ...
bshields619#6969
Prone version would be nice too
sami acbar
That said... i'm also excited to see how it turns out! as varbind suggested the story can use a little tweaking but i really like where it's going. well done mate
sami acbar
I agree, a girl getting excited to get penetrated adds to the kinky side of the story and much better.
Interested
totally get the no at first then yes. I guess it is all comes down to when that line is crossed, before any physical forcing or after. Anyway something for you to think about.
Ogirls Art
I absolutely understand and appreciate your frankness. I was going for a no at first, that becomes a yes but I totally agree that it's not for everyone. I do like your phrase suggestions though. Maybe put some of that in episode 2 or 3. Again, thanks for the honest constructive feedback!
Interested
I really don't like that initial.... I am just going to say it... rape angle. Everyone has their own thing, but it would be way better to me if she was initially scared, then saw the size of the reveal and went for it willingly. Instead of please no, she could instead say things like, give it to me, more, etc
Ogirls Art
That's what she said 🤣! Eventually I'll try but not in this series. Don't think I can pull it off.
Bbk1
do you think triple P is ever on the table? :D:D:D
Ogirls Art
I honestly don't know. If I just did the video like i normally do, about a month but I'm looking into doing more with voice. Maybe voice actress and doing lip syncing? Or voice changers? (but just imagining recording myself in the throes of passion.. I just can't) So timing wise, it's unclear. I know you asked earlier. Sorry for the late response.
Skarn
Maybe you could explore the DP experience with this kind of story...
Tom Groove
When does a new video come out?
