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Paradis Animatic
🕑 Added 2021-08-15 00:55:23 +0000 UTCRecently took a break from Make Magic to help get the juices flowing again. I've had this in my head for a while now but I wanted to avoid announcing anything until I got the OK from Udachi to use his track. Fortunately he got back to me a few days ago and ever since I've been speedrunning this animatic!
I'm super excited for this project, but for the time being I'll likely continue to focus on Make Magic. There's a certain mindset you gotta get into to rough animation and I feel I've been too impatient with these so far 😅 It's certainly refreshing to have something less animation heavy when compared to Make Magic though!
I hope you guys have been well <3
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Longreach Jones
Artistically the scene is great, the strobing coloration is fairly well hypnotic. I suspect all it needs is a subtle movement or change from the character to keep it out of the disturbing/uncanny zone.
Kayla
Ah, yeah, I see what you mean! I've been considering changing up the pose entirely for that part, but if I keep it the same I'll make sure to do something so she doesn't look so dead-eyed lol
Longreach Jones
Came back to this for at least the 5th time and had a thought hit me. The section between 0:30 and 0:50 might be slightly improved by including a blink or other eye moment such as a happy squint (slight raising of the lower eyelid as if smiling)
