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Sketches

🕑 Added 2018-02-27 05:31:01 +0000 UTC

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Secured Party

succubus hybrid should be mantis like they have such a powerful level of attraction to the oppisite sex that the male mates with the female even though she will bite his head off once he busts a nut.

TheCount991

I'm not really a fan of the tan lines, but otherwise I quite like her as she is. Though if you keep the tan lines perhaps make them match her clothing a bit better? It looks like her arms are tanned despite being covered, while her upper chest is exposed, but not tanned. I like the colors - she looks very ordinary without looking drab. I wouldn't mind her looking a bit more muscular, but then that's something I would say about pretty much any girl ever, so... Oh, and thank you very much for all the reasonably proportioned breasts in your art. I happen to prefer smallish boobs, so it's a nice change from the usual massive ones in most games.

Arachnid

To react on that, she can shapeshift so her appearance is kinda her (our) choice (not a fan of abs) But piercing could be a nice touch :)

Criss Cyanide

I understand they're sketches but the super similar colour palette is odd to look at for the time being although for the most part I do like how she looks (but I really like your art style as a whole, it's stuff that is absolutely frame and hang on Walls material). I'd prefer the lass to be a bit burlier meaning in solid shape considering Her whole life is dealing with all kinds of Monster Ladies I'd expect her to have some musculature or abs in her Human Form, she just looks like she'd be broken in 2 after even a small encounter with a Monster Lady. Also, Piercings but this is purely a personal preference and in no way a suggestion :P. Most of my thoughts would be really really niche so this is all I can input, sorry!

Syvaron

there will be one main design which will be used for most scenes. (not sure if I make the futa and female maincharacter look completely different). tan lines won't always be seen, as the clothing is designed to have easy access to everything without needing to undress

FossorTumulus

I like the general design, but I'm not really into tan lines myself and I prefer thicker thighs. That said are you going to make multiple options available or is it one design in the end and that's it? ps I really like it that you don't do over the top curves and impossible massive tits like in some other games.

Syvaron

Looks like its gonna be insect. Will probably be in the game in maybe 2 weeks

Arachnid

If you ask me i'll say i love it but then again i really like all your designs (Exept the Demon harpy, that's the only one i don't like).

John Belmont

I like the character as is. I like the hairstyle in particular. If I had any feedback it would be, the tan lines are weird(don't really match her general wear, arms and legs look too dark) and she lacks color overall. I don't think she should have any drastic color changes, but a slightly more standout hair-tie and maybe dark green eyes or something? Maybe some slightly more pinkish lips?