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One Piece - Halfway Broken 98 & 99

🕑 Added 2026-01-02 05:16:12 +0000 UTC
One Piece - Halfway Broken 98 & 99
One Piece - Halfway Broken 98 & 99
One Piece - Halfway Broken 98 & 99
One Piece - Halfway Broken 98 & 99

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The Foreign Traveler

Yamato! Vivi! Took ya girls long enough! Really glad they’re getting some love…more so Yamato for now. 😁 Here you are Novus! Edit 1: …to risk the “loses” trying would… …to risk the “losses” trying would… Edit 2: …so much as “a” was a puppet… …so much as “it” was a puppet… Edit 3: …put himself “for” his crew… …put himself “or” his crew… Edit 4: …in order to “gage”…certain things… …in order to “gauge”…certain things… Edit 5: …I hope “my” and my companion don’t… …I hope “me” and my companion don’t…

BPellet

You know I never really considered the negatives of Boa losing the waifu polls. She genuinely liked Luffy for not turning to stone without haki, but here the only thing going for this Luffy is freeing the slaves and accidentally killing celestial dragons and an elder. It'll be interesting to see how you write a ride or die like her with possibly no interest in this Luffy, maybe even being straight up antagonistic towards him and the crew (though I doubt she would be due to Rayleigh). Tyftc Novus!

Novus Peregrine

Obviously a coincidence! Since you're here, you clearly have too good of taste to be a serial killer! Possibly a serial Eldrich Tentacle Monster. But those are mostly harmless if you're not a magical girl...

Novus Peregrine

Yep to Rusukaina being somewhat useful. Honestly more to the rest of the crew instead of Luffy and Yamato. Those two are already far enough along that the island won't be all that directly useful to them, though what Rayleigh can teach personally will be. Zoro, in particular, will benefit from it as an alternative to his training with Mihawk and the Humadrills. At least as far as Haki goes.

Novus Peregrine

Chapter 98 A/N 1: Honestly, aside from pointing out the ridiculousness of how easy it actually SHOULD be to navigate the Grand Line, if Oda didn't ignore all logic, not a lot to say about this chapter :-p. It's really just cleanup of the Drakestone adventure and setup for the next arc.

Novus Peregrine

This comment is for slightly belated author's notes (I got distracted T-_)! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Camille

Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to Weatheria and then Rusukaina :) Beyond Rayleigh’s initial haki lessons, Rusukaina will be a great island for the crew to revisit at several points during the timeskip so that they can train against strong opponents. Would love to see a good chunk of the crew ‘conquer’ the island by the end of their two year training. Happy new year!

Camille

Oof… Here’s some advice; don’t say that kind of sentence if you want to stop being single… As a woman I can personally say that ‘I need some bitches, stat’ is an entirely unattractive and offputting sentence to hear.

Jamie Celtic

Thanks for the Great chapter, and me owning a pig farmin middle of nowhere is just a coincidence not an indication of being a serial killer 😏, happy hogmanay

WhatAFungi

Mmmmaaannn I need some bitches, stat. I’ve never felt more single.


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