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Mystic Strip Search - Comic Script / Spoilers /
🕑 Added 2019-07-29 17:19:06 +0000 UTCHello everyone! I have worked tirelessly to perfect the script for the 3rd (and possibly final) Act of our WildeHopps comic, Mystic Strip Search!
If you want to read the early versions of the comic's script here are
Act 1: Like a gift
Act 2: Echo
Without further ado, here is Act 3: Just be ourselves
The 3 snow white arctic vixens, after taking off their clothes at the changing tent, headed out to their destination in the Mystic Spring Oasis.
Luckily they headed right towards the direction where Judy and Nick were trying to dry themselves up a bit before their encounter. "Girls!”
"Nicky! " The tree vixen shouted with joy in union, as they weaved towards our pair, they tried to get Nick into a naked group hug, but he swifted behind Judy to push her forward.
"Nilla, Cherry and Angel, this is my girlfriend, Judy! "
Judy looked at Nick in surprise. They have been dating for a while now but Nick never called her his girlfriend before. She was snapped back to reality by 3 pointy noses staring right into hey face from less than an inch away.
"HA! CALLED IT!” Her yell made Judy jump back with a scare. "And you told me he is into males!” Nilla grinned at Cherry who just shrugged and sulked , while Nick just looked in confusing and protest.
"It’s so nice to meet you Judy! Don’t mind my sisters. ” Angel said and offered a paw shake for Judy. "Nick told so much about you! How you met, " Nilla leaned over her sister’s shoulder
"Well except the part that you are dating. The police chief is cool with it? ” Cherry added while leaning back
Judy, smiled nervously "Well, we didn’t really… tell him.”
"Oh, a secret romance! So awesome! " Angel squealed with glee.
"Okaaay girls.” Nick interrupted " Lets leave the gossip for later, you said you have something for us.”
The girls led them through a building to another inner garden with a big pool, that had a lot of walls and tents around it creating many small private side pools.
The room was filled with the sounds of a waterfall, but Judy could pick up the echoes of light moans and groans of pleasure.
The vixens swam through a crack between two walls and our pair followed them. In there the pool ended with some benches on, massage beds on the edge of the pool, on which a pair of polar bears were greeting the vixens.
"Hello Mr and Mrs. Kozlov! Ready for you session?” Nilla swum closer for a pawshake.
"Would you be against our friends joining us today? " Angel signaled Judy and Nick to swim closer.
"Wilde? " the male polar bear lowered his shaded pair of glasses in mild disinterest then pushed them back up.
"Kozlov!? What a surprise to see you here!" Nick spread and pulled Judy under his arms. "I hope you don't mind us, my girlfriend, Judy, wishes to learn some techniques from the girls!"
Judy gave her fox a 'I do?' look
"Oh my, you youngsters are so adorable together, of course you can stay, right Boris?" Mrs Kozlov turned to her husband, to which he smiled and nodded.
"While of course, Judy, Nick make yourself at home!"
The little pair found themselves next to the polar bear couple on the edge of the pool on the submerged massage beds.
The two artcic vixens climbed over the bodies of Mr and Mrs Kozlov and started instructing them loudly so they could hear them, while Angel was guiding Judy and Nick..
"Remember the first lesson? " Nilla started "Well, lets have a quick recap, since we have some newcomers"
"The word Tantra stands for expanding the sensual spectrum of our and our partner's bodies." Cherry lead Mr. And Mrs Kozlov into position.
The large bear lied face down in a relaxed manner, arms and legs slighty spread but not too moch, his wife standing next to him, softly starting to massage his shoulders.
"It's not just and erotic massage. It's goal is weaving together the different energies of male and female body to achieve a stronger, deeper connection and increase the health of the relationship."
Judy allowed the vixen to gently guide her paws and body. "Lean over him. Feel each other's breath. Try to breathe together."
Judy felt Nick's warmth beneath her, and as their faces touched, she felt his slow pants on her own. It was surprisingly calm and relaxing.
"Oil is essential part of massage, it repairs the body while it's scent relaxes the soul." Cherry helped apply some on the back of Kozlov.
"The massage is to increase the sexual mood, not to serve as the act itself" Nilla added. "Light touches. Palm, the back of your paw, finger tips. Use every part of your body to feel each other."
Judy guided her paws along Nick's oiled arms. She never noticed his muscles before which were so defined now as she touched them out beneath his fur.
Angel guided her paw between Nick's shoulder blades and pressed down in a smooth vertical motion. "This is a trap muscle. It stores a lot of stress" Her paws guided her lover onto the back on the spine. "Many forget that our backs are a very sensitive zones. And erogenous."
Judy climbed over Nick her legs between his spread legs. She felt a twitch but didn't look down.
"Wash down the oil" she was instructed, as she reached next to Nick into the pool, and gently slowly with side motions cleaned him off.
With gentle kisses she slipped down from the neck back down to Nick's thighs.
They sat Nick up in a lotus position, and Judy climbed into his lap. They embraced each other, while continuing to gently caress every muscle with their fingers on each other's body.
"Tantra has 3 main focuses" Nilla started the lecture again "selflessness. learning to enjoy holding back and orgasm and lasting long for our partner."
Judy felt Nick's twitching heat on her lips stomach, and it felt bigger and harder than ever before.
She was sure, she also felt a lot hotter than she ever has done, and she never was cold towards her fox.
They switched to another position that the girls demonstrated with the help of the Kozlov. Nick went behind Judy, but instead of penetrating her, he reached down and gently massaged her legs.
"Make love: It is no reason or end goal, just each other. In a dance without a beginning and without and end." Angel whispered to them
They sat up their knees, both leaning back, Judy could only think about the perfection of having a partner that she felt so one with. And for a moment, she was sure she heard Nick saying her exact thoughts, he she was also sure he didn't talk because she would've felt that in his breathing.
"And lastly embracing: to strip away your fears of showing your affection, getting rid of feeling ashamed for what love."
Those words were ringing in her ears, ash she turned around and planted a gentle kiss on Nick's lips
With that the session was concluded and the vixen triplets after having their goodbye's left through the pool.
"Wow.... Nick that was simply amazing" Judy lying in his arms on the massage bed enjoying the slowly dispersing heat that engulfed her entire being. "I really enjoyed this."
"Yeah. I wanted to try this ever since I've seen the triplets at work in the Palace." Nick's ears peaked and he turned to Kozlov
"Oh, that's right, what ARE you and the triplets doing here? I thought they work at your wellness palace in tundra town."
Kozlov, smirked "Can't a bear and his wife want a little change of scenery?"
"Aw, but I'm sure there is more to it. You like to combine the fun with the practical!" Nick pushed with the obvious overshooting compliment that was just more cheesy with his finger guns.
"*Sigh* A high paying client at the Palace, wanted a change of scenery because she got bored of the snow. So I made an arrangement with Yax to rent the best rooms for her and I had to come overlook her well being personally.
Judy raised an eyebrow "Wow, she must be really important, I'm kinda curious who she is".
Kozlov murmured a bit. "Well, alright, since you are a friend of the boss, I guess, I can show you".
'wait what?' Judy thought, but her confusion was cleared up the moment, the bear took off his glasses and she could take a better look at him. He wasn't Mr.Big's right-hand mammal, the bear that always carried him around.
"But warning: This is off the books, Nicky."
"My lips are sealed" Nick gestured as the bears moved past them in the water.
Suddenly his ears got yanked down by Judy. "This whole undercover stuff was just a trick to get me massage you?!"
"Of course not. It was also so I could massage you" He winked.
Judy with an eyeroll and a smile followed the bears out to the main pool.
Kozlov swum to another wall and offered a paw to lift Judy and Nick up just so they can peek over to the other side.
Judy couldn't believe her eyes. Nick was right after all.
The missing pop star Gazelle, whom the entire city has been searching for for a month now was right there, enjoying tantric sex guided by the artctic vixens with a little fennec fo...
"Finnick!"
Judy's surprised gasp lucky was perfectly in sync with Gazelle's sigh for he lover, as he massaged her lower lips with his paws.
"Many make the mistake of stroking the clitoris too soon!" Nilla instructed him "That can be straight up painful. You have to let the clitoris come out with arousal first."
Judy and Nick got lowered back down into the pool
"What? Gazelle, here? Why, how? The entire city has been looking for her."
"She had enough of the spotlight and run off from a shooting of a music video" Kozlov explained. "Ever since that, she has been hiding out in at Kozlov's Palace. She paid good money for my secrecy. I hope I can trust you with this information. Now if you excuse us, we got to pick up my son Morris from school."
"Naturally, we will just call off the search, but keep her location to ourselves." Nick nodded
"Thanks you, for everything, we had a lot of fun!"
"Of course, any time, kids! " his wife smiled at Judy warmly as she hugged her husband's.
As they walked towards the locker tent, Judy noticed the Otterton couple just entering the Spring at the front door and heading there themselves.
"OH! Mr.Wilde! You did come! Had you have a chance to try the place I suggested?"
"Oh yes!" Nick replied "It was lovely, thank you for the tip!"
Judy looked surprised but she connected the dots quickly. Otterton was a florist and gartner. He probably had part in building the area, that's why he knew about the cave.
"Oh, he told you as a 'thank you' for your help in the nighthowler case."
"Well, I wouldn't be here if not for the two of you" He replied then surprised Mrs.Otterton with a kiss.
"We were just heading there ourselves if you wanna join us." she said after escaping her husban's mustache.
"Thank you, we will consider it!" Judy replied with a smile.
As the Ottertons walked off, Judy just stood there on the enge of the busy pool, deep in her thoughts.
"What's on your mind, Carrots? You're already thinking about how to write the report of today?"
"Oh? Oh, no. Sorry, It's just weird that some mammals feel the need to run off and hide."
"Well, do you need the entire world to know what you feel, for you to feel it? No, you don't."
"I love you." Nick's ears jumped and his eyes sprung open as he looked down at his bunny embracing him.
"I just noticed, I never said it to your infront of anyone. I love you, Nick." she repeated.
Nick smiled and leaned into her neck, his warm lips tingling her cheeks "I love you too, Judy."
She felt like she had enough playing around for today, she grabbed Nick by the neck and pulled him in for a kiss.
- The End <3
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That will likely conclude this comic of mine that I've been working on for a year now as of today. The original premise didn't change much, but if you are interested I here is a few fun trivia from the writing process that went into this last arc:
-Investigation: I originally intended the case to be something really important, a real criminal case needing Judy and Nick to get real intel out of a bad guy. This was the first thing changed and got replaced with Gazelle just "going missing" because she ran off with her lover like some celebrities do
-The meaning of tantra: Before I dove into some research about erotic massage and tantric massage, I imagined the sequense with the vixen triplets to be a lot more involving. But after reading into the matter I felt like that representing them in a more professional manner that do treat sex as an important bonding progress of two people (which is tantra is about) rather than a joyous passtime would be the right way to go.
-Kozlov and his interests: I originally just wanted to add Kozlov in, maybe have him involved with one of the girls. In fact I'm still kinda torn on that part. But I later realized 2 huge plotholes with that. Kozlov has a son, Morris in the concept version of Zootopia. I felt like it would be nice to keep that about his character, rather than making him a cold gangster for the Big Family. So Instead of hooking him up with one of the vixens, I decided to introduce his wife instead. I will try to design her as cute as I can.
-Kozlov knows: Another small part I missed is: Kozlov in the final version of the movie is Mr.Big's bodyguard. I simply wanted him to be introduces as a new character to the universe, but I couldn't after that, and replacing him didn't feel right either. So I had to solve this loophole to still at least fool Judy for the investigation, by Kozlov simply not mentioning Judy that he knows her, and her not recognizing him due to his glasses (and him not really ever talking to her before)
Phew those things really gave me a headache in writing but I think the end result came out quite right. But let me know what you think, if you wish some parts to be changed, I would be happy to hear your opinion, if I get multiple great Ideas I would gladly make a pool out of your ideas!
That reminds me: don't forget to drop your ideas/requests into the Sketch Suggestion Box for this summer, I await ideas till the end of August!
Comments
ReaderNo31142
I love the idea Can't wait to see how it will turn out, Rob :3
Brad
8D
RobCivecat
Well, like I said I do welcome suggestions and I don't mind the tantra session end with a little action. I think I can fit it in there, if would fit the scenery
Brad
Awww I was hoping we’d get a full sex scene in the comic. :( Oh well, this sounds interesting regardless. :D
