robcivecat
patreon
MysticStripSearch - Page 16 - WIP
🕑 Added 2019-06-17 00:13:47 +0000 UTCHello Lewd Crew! Working on the next page, I realized I haven't actually written down the 3rd (and probably final) act of the comic yet. As I believe all of my supporters should have a say in what comes (or most probably comes) next, I think it's important to give you an option the see a rough script about it! I will do my best to provide that this week before I finis this page! Hope you will like it!
Until that, enjoy Nick struggling to keep his eyes open for his contact, while Judy enjoys herself!
Comments
m42
:))))
Brad
IMO the drooling in the last panel is a bit much. It makes Nick look like a mindless sex-crazed zombie, even with the speech bubbles. Everything else is great though. :)
Looking really good can't wait for the climax 😉
InTheLionsDen
The action is coming along great. Good angles and his attempt at keeping some control is fun to see.
Cats n' Cameras
It's got a very good natural progression
RobCivecat
Thank you! Glad to hear that! I was thinking a lot on the page layout!
Cats n' Cameras
Fantastic page so far :)
