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Chapter no.65 An Unfair Trade

🕑 Added 2025-03-31 02:29:07 +0000 UTC
Chapter no.65 An Unfair Trade

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AnonymousJohn

Boss, I am begging you to format your writing. You have technical prowess and a good story, but the lack of linebreaks makes you look like an amateur. It’s difficult to read and it’s legitimately frustrating. I don’t enjoy reading your stuff. Let me say that again because I’m not sure you got it. I refuse to believe I’m the first person to mention this. Your writing is painful to read and that has nothing to do with the writing itself. It’s just editing. Maybe you don’t care about the audience experience, but I’m hoping you do. Format your shit. It’s embarrassing, man. Have some pride in your work. Don’t just put up with what Patreon does to your writing.

Aiden Steinman

I wonder what that strange discoloration on Charmander is. My best guess is maybe an embedded Mega Stone so that when he evolves, it fuses with him, making a permanent Mega Charizard. It'd be really cool to see how Austin deals with it, as mega evolution was introduced after his time during XY if you decide to go that route.


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