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Chapter no.34 Naruto
🕑 Added 2024-11-26 11:00:59 +0000 UTCChapter no.34 Naruto vs Tenten
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Tenten ran harder, her feet pounding against the dirt path as if she could outrun her thoughts. The crisp morning air filled her lungs, but it did nothing to clear the frustration boiling inside her. She thought she was past this. After everything she'd been through—the years of training, the sacrifices, the growth—she thought she'd accepted her path.
But Naruto's words kept echoing in her mind.
"You could be more than just a weapons specialist."
Tenten clenched her fists mid-stride, feeling the heat rise to her face as if she'd been scolded. She had given up on medical ninjutsu for a reason—she didn't have the talent, didn't have the flawless chakra control required. It wasn't her fault, was it? She'd tried. She'd failed. That was it.
But then her mind betrayed her, dragging up thoughts of Lee. Rock Lee, who had started with nothing. Who had no talent for ninjutsu or genjutsu. Who had worked so relentlessly that his hard work became his talent.
Why couldn't she do that? Why couldn't she have worked harder? If Lee could take his weaknesses and turn them into strengths, why couldn't she have done the same?
For a fleeting moment, the words she never wanted to admit surfaced in her mind.
I settled.
Her breath hitched, and she slowed her pace, the sound of running water pulling her from her thoughts. She had reached her home: the blacksmith's shop.
The Higurashi Blacksmith Shop wasn't like the traditional buildings in Konoha. It stood out in a way that was both rustic and charming—a multi-story watermill house constructed from aged stone and timber. Ivy climbed the weathered walls, and balconies jutted out from various levels, each cluttered with tools, hanging pots, and the occasional drying herbs.
The massive waterwheel turned steadily in the river's current, its rhythmic creaking blending with the sounds of the forge within. Smoke curled from the stone chimney, carrying the familiar scent of coal and heated metal. The building was warm, industrious, and full of life—just like the man who ran it.
Tenten shook her head at the sight. Her father had once joked that he named the shop the "Higurashi Blacksmith Shop" because he didn't have time for anything more creative. She was certain a five-year-old could have come up with something better.
Her father, Higurashi Hiten, was a man of contradictions: equal parts war veteran and tinkering genius. Injured on the front lines during the battle for Kannabi Bridge, he'd survived thanks to none other than Minato Namikaze himself. The Earth Release jutsu that had crushed his left leg left him unable to return to the field, but in his recovery, he had found a new calling.
Hiten had been so fascinated by the engineering of his prosthetic leg that he apprenticed himself to the blacksmith that made it and rebuilt his life—literally and figuratively. Now, as a master craftsman, he was the go-to for shinobi who wanted the highest-quality weapons and tools.
Tenten was about to head inside when the sound of voices caught her attention. She froze, frowning.
One of them was unmistakably Naruto.
Stepping into the shop, Tenten stopped in her tracks.
There, standing at the counter, was Naruto, chatting animatedly with her father. Hiten had Naruto's helmet in his hands, turning it over like a child marveling at a shiny new toy.
"So, can you fix my armor set?" Naruto asked, his tone hopeful.
Hiten laughed, his prosthetic leg making a soft clink as he shifted his weight. "Do I look like a miracle worker to you, kid?"
Tenten frowned at the comment, her lips pressing into a thin line. Why was her father downplaying his skills like that? If anyone could repair armor, it was him.
"You can't fix it?"
Hiten let out a low whistle, shaking his head. "Fix it? This thing is way above my level. Just look at it! The amount of refined pure metal used in this helmet alone is more than I've worked with in my entire shop."
Naruto blinked, confused. "Uh… isn't that just normal metal?"
Hiten let out a hearty laugh, setting the helmet down carefully. "Kid, refined metal like this is very rare in Konoha. Most shinobi gear is made with iron sand that's had the impurities burned out. It's good, but it's not this. The only place with enough ore to make something like your armor is the Land of Iron." He gestured toward the helmet with reverence. "This isn't just armor—it's art."
Naruto scratched the back of his head, looking both impressed and disappointed. "Huh… so you really can't fix it?"
Hiten sighed, giving Naruto a sympathetic shrug. "I'm afraid not, kid. But I'll tell you this much—whoever made this armor? They're a genius."
It was then that Hiten and Naruto noticed Tenten standing in the doorway.
A wide grin spread across Hiten's face, his eyes lighting up. "Ah, my beautiful daughter is here!" he exclaimed proudly, his voice warm. "I was just talking to your interesting friend."
Tenten's face immediately darkened, her arms crossing over her chest. "He's not my friend," she snapped.
The air grew awkward as silence fell over the room.
"Ouch. Don't hold back or anything, Tenten. Tell me how you really feel."
Tenten glared at Naruto for acting like nothing happened between them, but her father cut in with a chuckle. "Now, now, don't be like that," Hiten said, his prosthetic leg clinking softly as he stepped closer. "The boy's got good taste in armor, if nothing else. And he's got manners. Better than some of the shinobi who come in here barking orders."
"See? Your dad gets it!"
"What do you want?"
Naruto paused, his usual grin nowhere to be seen. "I came for the spar. Swordsman to swordswoman… right?"
"Fine. Let's take this outside."
Her tone carried an edge, cold and unyielding, and it was clear from the way she turned on her heel that she didn't intend to treat this as a simple sparring match.
From the doorway, Higurashi Hiten frowned as he watched them step out into the open yard. Something about the way his daughter carried herself, the way her frustration simmered just beneath the surface, made him uneasy.
The morning air was crisp, and the light from the rising sun spilled across the yard, painting the dew-soaked grass in shades of gold. To the right stood Naruto, his Zweihander resting casually on his shoulder. He looked relaxed, almost carefree, yet there was a quiet intensity in his gaze. To the left, Tenten adjusted the katana on her hip, her stance low and ready, the steel gleaming in the soft light. A few meters of space stretched between them, framed by the backdrop of trees swaying gently in the morning breeze. To the side, a river ran steadily, its surface catching the sunlight, reflecting flashes of gold and silver.
The sun hung low, its light creeping over the horizon, casting long shadows that danced between the two figures. The faint rustle of leaves and the murmur of the river were the only sounds, the calm before the inevitable clash.
From the porch, Higurashi Hiten leaned on the railing, watching the two with a mix of pride and anticipation. His eyes darted to Naruto's massive Zweihander, and he couldn't help but let out a small, delighted chuckle. "What a ... sword," he murmured to himself, unable to hide his admiration.
"I see you haven't been practicing what I taught you."
"Your teachings worked for the katana," Naruto replied. "But I can't fight the same way with a greatsword."
Hiten chimed in. "He's right, Tenten. That sword wasn't designed for finesse like a katana. A weapon like that relies on its weight and momentum to do the work, not the user's strength or precision."
Tenten's grip on her katana tightened, her jaw clenching at her father's comment. She could feel the sting of embarrassment creeping in, amplified by Naruto's calm demeanor. He wasn't mocking her, but the fact that he didn't rise to her bait only made her more frustrated.
Silence stretched between them, heavy and tense.
Hiten's sharp eyes flicked between the two. His years as a shinobi and blacksmith told him everything he needed to know. "This won't last long," he muttered under his breath. "It'll end in one strike."
As the sun crept higher, its light caught the surface of the river, creating a dazzling flash that masked Tenten for a split second. She moved in that moment, her body a blur of speed as she struck with a textbook Iai technique—a lightning-fast draw-and-strike maneuver.
But Naruto was ready.
With a surge of power, he brought the Zweihander down in a monstrous arc. The sheer weight and range of the greatsword made up for his slower speed, and its blade met Tenten's katana with an earth-shaking clang.
The katana didn't stand a chance.
With a deafening crack, the thinner blade shattered on impact, shards of steel scattering into the air like glimmering fragments of a broken dream. The force of the collision unleashed a blast of air that rippled outward, kicking up leaves and dust in a swirling vortex.
When the dust settled, the Zweihander's edge was poised mere centimeters from Tenten's shoulder, its monstrous weight held still.
"It's over," Hiten said softly from the porch.
Tenten stood frozen, staring blankly at the broken hilt in her hands. The shattered katana blade lay scattered at her feet, reflecting the morning light in cruel fragments as she tried to make sense of what had just happened. Days ago, she had stood before Naruto as a teacher, guiding him patiently through the fundamentals of kenjutsu. She had taught him everything—how to hold a blade, how to position his body, how to read his opponent's movements. She had expected it to take weeks, months even, for him to grasp the basics let alone this.
It had taken him two days to refine the basics into an actual style.
Two days to not just match her, but to surpass her.
The weight of the realization hit her like a punch to the gut. Years of her life—years spent sweating in the heat of the forge, training until her muscles burned and her hands bled, pushing herself to master every technique she could find—had been eclipsed. Not by someone who shared her obsession, her passion, her dedication. No, it had been Naruto, a boy who only days ago couldn't tell a proper grip from a chokehold.
The katana had been her pride, her identity. Its shattering felt symbolic, as if the universe itself had declared her efforts meaningless.
Tenten's mind whirled with doubts she thought she'd buried. What was the point of all that work? Of all those years? She had fought so hard to carve out a place for herself, to prove she could be as skilled, as valuable, as anyone else. And now, standing there with nothing but a broken hilt in her hands, she felt small. Inadequate.
The bitterness was sharp, a familiar voice whispering in the back of her mind. You're just a weapons specialist. Not Tsunade. Not someone extraordinary. Just someone who mediocre.
"No!" Tenten shouted, her body trembling as she scrambled to her feet. "I'm not done yet!"
Her hands flew into a flurry of seals.
"Ninja Art: Rising Twin Dragons!"
The scrolls shot into the air, spinning in perfect unison. Smoke coiled around them, shaping into twin serpentine forms that roared into the sky. When the smoke cleared, Tenten leapt into the space between the scrolls, her hands moving like blinding lightning. Kunai, shuriken, spears, and blades poured down on Naruto in an unrelenting storm. The sheer precision of her strikes was breathtaking—each weapon aimed to corner him, overwhelm him, crush him under the weight of her skill.
From above, Tenten saw her weapons completely encase Naruto, forming a dense sphere of steel that left no room to breathe. For a moment, she allowed herself to feel satisfaction. She had him.
But then, a piercing light burst through the sphere, and in an instant, her weapons were blasted away by a shockwave. They clattered to the ground like scattered leaves.
Her ultimate attack was just destroyed by a single jutsu.
She landed softly, her boots crunching against the earth now littered with her weapons.
Naruto took a step forward, and instinctively, Tenten took a step back. Her heel caught on something, and she stumbled, falling onto her back.
"Stay back!"
Naruto stopped mid-step, his face softening as he raised his hands in a calming gesture.
"I said, stay back!"
Her hand darted to the nearest weapon—a kunai—and she hurled it with all her strength. It struck Naruto's chest plate and bounced off harmlessly. She reached for another, but her hands found only dirt.
And then he was standing over her.
Tenten's breath hitched as she squeezed her eyes shut, tears streaming freely down her cheeks. Her lips quivered as the frustration, the anger, and the humiliation boiled over.
"Okay, you win!" she shouted. "You proved your point!"
Her tears dripped onto the dirt below as she sniffed, unable to meet his gaze. "I'm not even a weapon specialist. I'm just… a loser. I get it, okay? Just say it. Say what you're thinking!"
Naruto didn't say anything.
"Say something! Gloat!" she screamed, her voice strained with desperation.
But instead of words, Naruto kneeled down in front of her. Slowly, he removed his gauntlet, setting it aside before reaching out. His hand was warm, calloused but gentle, as he brushed away a tear on her cheek. Tenten's eyes opened, and for the first time, she saw his face.
He wasn't smug. He wasn't triumphant. There was no pride in his expression—only shame.
"That was an amazing spar."
Tenten froze, her breath catching in her throat. "I lost," she whispered.
"Does winning mean everything?" Naruto asked. "This wasn't about winning. It's a spar between friends, right? Aren't we supposed to help each other get stronger?"
Tenten's lips twisted bitterly. "Friends don't humiliate each other," she muttered.
"You're right. They don't."
Her eyes snapped to his, her anger flaring again. "Then what about all of this? How is this not humiliating? You said I'm just a weapon specialist. Then you come here, to my home, in front of my father, and you—" Her voice broke. "You defeat me. You completely humiliate me."
Naruto was silent for a moment, his head bowed. Then, quietly, he spoke.
"Four thousand."
Tenten blinked, caught off guard. "What?"
"It took me four thousand shadow clones," Naruto said. "Four thousand clones, sparring over and over, taking hit after hit, making mistake after mistake. And yeah, it hurt. A lot. I can still feel every single failure." He looked at her with a small, tired smile. "But you know why I could do that? Because of the basics you taught me. You didn't just teach me how to swing a sword—you taught me how to fight."
Tenten stared at him, her mind racing, her lips trembling. "What are you saying?"
"I'm saying I'm sorry."
That stopped her cold.
"I'm sorry if I hurt you," he continued, his eyes earnest. "I'm not good with words. I say stupid things, and people take them the wrong way. What I meant wasn't that you're just a weapon specialist. What I meant was… being a weapon specialist is amazing. And I thought maybe… I could help you. I thought you could be both—an incredible weapon specialist and a medical ninja. But instead of helping, I just hurt you. And I'm sorry."
Tenten's heart twisted painfully in her chest as the weight of his words sank in. She looked down, shame blooming hot and sharp as she replayed everything in her mind—the misunderstanding, the anger, the bitterness. It all felt so foolish now.
"I'm such an idiot…"
"Huh?"
"I blew this completely out of proportion," she admitted, lying back on the dirt road with a heavy sigh. Her gaze turned skyward as the sun climbed higher, the light warm on her face. "I jumped to conclusions. I got mad over something I didn't even understand. I've been so… dumb."
Naruto blinked, scratching the back of his head. "You're not dumb. You're, like… really smart. And scary."
"Gee, thanks," she muttered dryly, though a small, reluctant smile tugged at her lips.
Naruto shifted closer, sitting cross-legged beside her. "You okay, senpai?"
Tenten let out a breathy laugh, shaking her head. "I'll be fine. I just… need a minute to process how ridiculous I've been." She turned her head slightly to look at him. "And for the record, I'm sorry, too. I shouldn't have assumed the worst about you."
Naruto grinned, his boyish energy returning. "Hey, don't sweat it! We're still cool, right?"
Tenten looked at him for a moment before closing her eyes with a sigh. "Yeah. We're still cool, maggot."
Naruto laughed, the sound light and genuine, and for the first time that morning, Tenten felt the weight on her chest begin to lift.
The silence between them lingered for a moment, the kind that allowed thoughts to settle and emotions to breathe. Tenten broke it first.
"Naruto," she began. "Do you think I chose the right path?"
Naruto hummed, not rushing to answer.
“What if I had done something different?” Tenten continued. “What if I’d become a medical ninja? What if I didn’t… settle for being a weapon specialist?”
“Was it easy to become a weapon specialist?”
Tenten blinked, caught off guard. “Easy? Hell no.” She let out a bitter laugh. “I couldn’t even tell you how many nights I cried myself to sleep because of how hard it was. But… I still did it.”
“Then how is that settling?”
“What do you mean?”
“If you worked so hard for something—something most people couldn’t even imagine doing—how is that settling?” Naruto asked. “That doesn’t sound like settling to me. That sounds like making your own path.”
The words hit Tenten like a bolt of lightning. Her eyes widened as something inside her clicked.
A laugh bubbled up from her chest—soft at first, then louder, until it mingled with the tears streaming down her cheeks. She cried and laughed, the release of years of frustration and self-doubt flooding out all at once.
She finally understood.
Lee had turned his hard work into talent, but so had she. She had been so blinded by Tsunade’s shadow, so fixated on what the legendary kunoichi represented, that she hadn’t realized her real goal. It wasn’t to be Tsunade Senju. No, it was to represent what Tsunade stood for—an idol, an inspiration for young kunoichi to look up to.
"Naruto," she said softly, wiping her eyes as she reached out her hand. He took it, pulling her to her feet.
“Thank you,” she said sincerely. “I needed that.”
“What, to get beat up by me?”
Tenten rolled her eyes, giving him a playful smack on the cheek. “Don’t push it.”
They started walking back toward the shop, where her father was waiting.
“Sorry for making a scene, Dad,” Tenten said sheepishly. “I’ll clean this place up later.”
Hiten waved her off, his smile smug and warm. “No worries. I’m just glad you worked things out with your boyfriend.”
Tenten froze mid-step, her face turning bright red.
“He’s not my boyfriend!” she shouted, her voice shrill with indignation.
Naruto, meanwhile, looked slightly hurt. “Wait… I’m not your friend?”
“No!” Tenten exclaimed quickly, flustered. “You are my friend! You’re not my boyfriend.”
“Wait… does that mean I’m a girl?”
Hiten burst out laughing, the sound echoing through the shop as Tenten slapped her forehead in exasperation.
“No, Naruto!” she groaned, glaring at her father, who was practically doubled over with laughter.
“Then what’s a boyfriend?”
Tenten sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose before launching into a rushed explanation.
“Ohhh,” Naruto said after a moment, his face reddening. He turned to Hiten, shaking his head vigorously. “Mr. Higurashi, Tenten and I are just friends. I swear!”
“Just friends, huh?” Tenten muttered under her breath, a little disappointed by how quickly he said it. But her father caught it, giving her a smug, knowing smile that only made her blush harder.
“Tenten!” Naruto called, oblivious to her embarrassment.
She turned to him, grateful for the distraction—until she froze.
In Naruto’s hands was a gleaming set of chainmail.
“Remember how I said I’d bring you an armor set?” Naruto said, holding it out to her. “Here.”
Tenten blinked, her heart skipping a beat. “Naruto, I… I don’t even know what to say.”
“Try it on,” Naruto said with a grin. “You can’t go around calling yourself a badass swordswoman without some awesome armor, right?”
Tenten nodded, her face warm as she practically snatched the armor from his hands and disappeared into the shop.
“So… what do you think?”
Hiten smiled, leaning casually against the doorframe. “Naruto, if you include more armor and weapons in the dowry, you’ve got my blessings.”
“What?”
Hiten burst out laughing again, his prosthetic leg clinking against the floor as he doubled over.
“DAD!” Tenten’s voice rang out from the shop.
A few moments later, the metallic clink of chainmail filled the air as Tenten stepped outside. The armor fit her perfectly, the interlocking rings gleaming in the sunlight. She looked down at herself, brushing her hands over the craftsmanship.
“It’s amazing,” she said softly, her cheeks pink.
“Amazing enough for a spar?”
Tenten looked up, startled.
“Don't think I have forgotten, senpai. This time, it’s my turn to teach you.”
Tenten blinked, caught off guard by his sincerity. She felt her face flush again but managed a small smile. “It’s my honor, Naruto-sensei.”
They both giggled at the playful exchange, the tension between them finally gone.
Hiten, however, wasn’t done. “Naruto,” he called out. “If you keep this up, I’ll have to start preparing for the wedding.”
“DAD!” Tenten shouted, her face bright red as she whirled on him.
Naruto, meanwhile, stood frozen, his face a mix of confusion and horror. “Wait, what?!”
“It’s a joke, Naruto,” Tenten muttered, her palm slapping against her forehead.
“Oh…” Naruto said, his face reddening. Then, after a beat, “Wait, why is that a joke?”
Hiten roared with laughter as Tenten groaned, throwing her hands in the air in exasperation.
“Because you’re impossible, that’s why!” she huffed, stomping back toward the shop.
Naruto scratched his head, muttering to himself. “I don’t get it…”
“Don’t worry, kid,” Hiten said, clapping him on the back. “You’ll figure it out one day. Hopefully before my grandkids arrive.”
“WHAT?!” Naruto yelped as Tenten’s voice echoed from inside the shop.
“DAD!!!”
Comments
Tyler Hooker
I ship Naruto and Tenten, please god, his obliviousness and her embarrassment is so fucking funny and cute
Natural
Thanks for the chapter. Tentens dad is awesome
Drim
I'm surprised Naruto is still only wind nature. Thought all those souls would change it somehow.
