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Chapter no.20 Naruto

🕑 Added 2024-10-29 18:31:51 +0000 UTC
Chapter no.20 Naruto

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Muhammad Hasnain

Hell yeah, I can't wait for you to react to the actual insane stuff later on the story on both sides. On darks souls we have the Gods, the abyss, magic, demons etc. On Konoha, we have Jiraya, Tsunade, Danzo and everyone else now having to deal with this Naruto who can turn into a dragon ( yes this is a skill you can get in dark souls, Naruto's version will be a little different than the game version )

Natural

Welp I’m not well versed in Norse mythology but that’s a cool detail to add. And yeah I called this short in comparison to the other chapters. Naruto’s declaration being the ending of this chapter was a good decision, I liked it. Can’t wait for what you have planned for the future.

Muhammad Hasnain

Well, I was going for the buildings and calling Fuinjutsu runes as a way to showcase that I based the lore of the uzumaki clan in this fanfic off the Norse and vikings. Even the story of the hanged man is inspired by the story of when Odin hanged himself to gain the power of the Runes. The chapter isn't short lol it's over 2.5k words long, it's just that the majority of the chapters of the darks souls Naruto are overall 4k so I get in comparsion it's shorter, I was originally going to add Naruto going to team 7 and starting his training but I felt like Naruto's declaration was like the cut off line like this chapter needed time to settle in due to the importance of it all. Also, yeah the hawk is obviously Danzo and he will create a lot of problems in the future unfortunately for Danzo, Naruto can indefinitely respawn, get stronger by killing and has barely even scratched the surface of the powersystems of Dark souls. Meaning, the moment Danzo realizes that he fucked him, he is royally screwed and that's not considering Naruto mastering stuff from his own verse like jutsu, fuinjutsu, kenjutsus, ninjutsu, taijutsu etc

Natural

Thanks for the chapter. The lore behind the Uzumaki was interesting and I like the origin of the founding member. It seems like you changed the lore a little to fit more of the Dark Souls theme with the buildings, and the Uzumaki calling the fuinjutsu Runes (correct me if I’m wrong). Chapter is short but I can feel it is an important one for Naruto. I can also see problems that might come with this in the future. Naruto would probably trust Hawk’s words more than the Hokage’s since Hawk just revealed more to Naruto about his family in one day than the Hokage who hasn’t said anything in the past decade. If I am right about Hawk being Danzo then it would be interesting if Danzo changed the journal slightly as to subtly manipulate Naruto. Overall great chapter, can open a lot for the future. Can’t wait for the next.


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