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Chapter no.9 Naruto

🕑 Added 2024-10-12 10:28:20 +0000 UTC
Chapter no.9 Naruto

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Natural

I like it, and it makes sense. I can see Naruto acting like this

Muhammad Hasnain

I wanted this to be in line with Naruto's character plus the whole I must keep secrets doesn't work with a 12 year old Naruto but since I didn't want Hiruzen and the others to know about the dark souls world, I just made it so that Naruto literally say no, I am not telling you anything, fuck off. I hope this all feels natural ( pun intended ) and an enjoyable read.

Natural

Thanks for the chapter. The way Naruto is going about things is interesting. Usually someone in Naruto’s situation would probably keep everything secret yet Naruto is showing almost everything. At first I was confused on why Naruto was wearing the armor and saying he’s Oscar’s squire in front of the Hokage but then I remember this is 12 year old Naruto.


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