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Chapter no.86 Monkey Clan part 2

🕑 Added 2024-10-09 21:40:58 +0000 UTC
Chapter no.86 Monkey Clan part 2

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Natural

Thank for the chapter. Other than minor errors that I see the other commenters stated I thought it was good. So Naruto as the potential of learning lava release. That’s cool to think about. I remember in the beginning when Naruto was given the task of making Sasuke his brother, if he succeeded he would have access to the Uchiha clans techniques including the sharingan (I might be incorrect). Does this mean Naruto can learn other clan techniques and releases like the scorch release, Byakugan, and Gara’s control over sand?

Muhammad Hasnain

I was going for a more along the lines of Naruto doesn't know what the emotion is rather than having both be in there.

Pheonixarcher

pride, maybe, or pity. My suggestion. Perhaps pride, maybe even pity.

Muhammad Hasnain

Thx, and btw, fixed it.

Pheonixarcher

Naruto stopped so suddenly that he nearly crashed into Hiruzen, the old man, right in front of him. This doesn’t make sense. If you wanted to crash to almost occur you would need him to be BEHIND Naruto.


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