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Chapter no.81 Be the Best

🕑 Added 2024-07-23 12:40:57 +0000 UTC
Chapter no.81 Be the Best

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Rhett Sellers

Fair enough on Kakashi. Like many, I do tend to comment where I see a potential issue. I will try and remember to offer a few more on that fic than I normally do.

Muhammad Hasnain

Kakashi in the original was a more reserved teacher but he never had to deal with his Genin crying and paralleling Rin in a sense, so in one way you can say that Kakashi is forced to help Ino. This is my takeaway. Also, try to also comment on the Pokemon fanfic, I really like your input and new chapter in going to be out in about an hour.

Rhett Sellers

I liked the chapter, but I cant say this felt like Kakashi's behavior. Perhaps he was developed more in this direction in the fic and I forgot it, but based on the original story he seemed more the sort to watch and let the kids figure it out. Perhaps step in and teach only when necessity forces him. He never really seemed like a good teacher to me until after the chunin exams, when he seemed to care more. For instance, he never really addressed any of the personality issues of his genin team until they came to blows with each other.

Muhammad Hasnain

Well her crush is still there because Naruto's actions still very much effected her life and reputation and ideals. It's just not in the sugar coated delusion that it was all for her. So, with that in mind, Ino would try to be friends with Naruto which will lead Naruto get get Shikamaru and Choji as his friends ( first males friends that isn't older than him, yay )

Natural

Thanks for the chapter. For the summoning I don’t think a combat oriented one would work because he got his clones. I wanna say something that scouts or spy’s like a an owl or even a fox but he has Kaguyas mind (I forgot if that’s the name of the ability). Maybe a monkey since it will be Haruzen that will give Naruto the skill. I like what you did about Ino and her development, one issue I have is that her realization about her crush on Naruto was a bit to fast but it’s not a big thing. Can’t wait for the next chapter


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