DragonSnow
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🕑 Added 2020-07-27 14:34:24 +0000 UTCIn the new version, writing copywriting has become a very difficult challenge. I have to take into account the changes in the plot, and have to connect with the subsequent plots, and add more character emotions... The old version of puro is indeed relatively indifferent, which is also As a result, I almost had to rewrite almost the entire follow-up plot, and at the same time I should not deviate too far from the original...
在新版中，写文案变成了一种非常困难的挑战，我要顾及剧情上的改变，也要与后续的剧情有所联系，要加入更多人物情感…旧版的puro确实比较冷漠，这也导致我几乎要重写几乎整个后续剧情，同时要不偏离原本的太远……
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Snow Dragon
我这个人喜欢亲力亲为
不能寻找帮手一起策划吗？
Snow Dragon
i will!
Angelo
Just like many others I've also been loving the newer Puro better. Perhaps you could make optional scenes and parts that explore what he likes or some of his emotions in a way that doesn't have an effect on the main story so you don't have to worry about rewriting too much while still expanding the character if you so choose.
Askareth
If you want to deviate you can, if it helps! Dunno if people can help?
DeinFerret
I love how you've shaped this new Puro, better than the original even!
AnXia
辛苦了。都已经是special了，放开一些吧！
Shadow Slayer
Whatever you decide to do with the story be it keeping most of it the same and only changing some parts, or reworking it entirely, we’ll enjoy whatever you give us just as much if not more than the original
Shiny Umbreon
How you are handling Puro now is so much better than the original. I think you should feel free to deviate as far as you want, it will let you have more creative freedom in expressing Puro the way you feel is the best, without having to worry about staying within constraints.
A Ghost Bat.
I love the story so far!
