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Page 10, aw yeah

🕑 Added 2015-02-18 21:07:21 +0000 UTC

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Shiin

It's probably true, as Ace pointed out they often talk and thinks like that. But I will keep it in mind, try to get some variation in if I can remember, thanks! : )

Shiin

Hehe I guess that is a good word to use to describe it :D Thank you!

Shiin

Thanks, and he is indeed ^^ No I don't the great finish will be quite yet, but we are geting there : )

Ace

I kindly disagree on this one, even this page not have any wide open mouths, only clenched teeth. Be aware that most of the time the characters are either talking or moaning, and a closed mouth would looks strange (except if they are into ventriloquism ^^). As you say he can try to vary, but I not think is an issue or even that common.^^

Dantels

One small issue with your work that a friend pointed out to me was that you tend towards having people's mouths opened wide all the time. It's not too big of an issue but it may help if you try to vary it from time to time.

Ace

Intense is how I would difine this one, the first two panels are pretty sexy but the third one is the showstealer, amazingly done, thanks for that. ^^