UnionFaps
acaswell from patreon
acaswell patreon

Chapter 444: First Spark  - Markets and Multiverses

🕑 Added 2025-09-19 04:29:43 +0000 UTC

Comments

bcdp

While at the start the explanation of what will happen sounds like speaking to a child, during the chapter it gets increasingly less so and at the end you wouldn't think the priest addresses a child from how he answers the questions. Yeah, I know, probably a side effect of this being an info dump, but still. And to give an idea of what I mean when I referring to talking to such a little child: "All right, Miria. Can you give me your hand? Good. I’m going to give you a little spark from the fire now. It’s hot, so it’s going to hurt a bit — like when you touch a mug that’s too warm. It will keep hurting for a little while. But you can make it stop. The spark wants to go to your heart, and you can help it. Try to move it, like when you move your arm up and down. It might feel a bit strange, but you’ll get it. Once the spark reaches your heart, the ouchie will go away — and you’ll feel warm and strong inside. Your father and me are right here. You’re not alone. Ready?" Ignore the content. And I am not a writer. But I hope the change in tone and word choice is obvious enough. For context, the part that initially stumbled over in this early paragraph was to tell a little kid to "push through the pain".


More Creators