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Chapter 23 - Branching Paths

🕑 Added 2024-06-13 15:32:33 +0000 UTC

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Ben Bass

TYFTC! I like how resilient Brynn is in the face of the loss, he is/was an EMT who has to deal with tragedy and loss mixed in with the highs of saving people day after day. That and his now drive and focus on getting more powerful will be his guiding mantra moving forward. I can’t wait to see how he does with the upcoming challenges of getting from his newbie status and on up!

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Moon Winchester

Also Brynn keeps introducing himself via first name but he is a Earthling, whats his last name? You know when being formal you do that James Bond style introduction. The names ______, Brynn ______

Moon Winchester

Just realized. You should stipulated in the prestige message that it, "Complete wipe and reset of personal space." acting like a little hint to what to expect he can have access to. Then do a call back when he's at the in going, "Oh so thats what that means. I wonder then what Serapheals, personal space looked like?".

Moon Winchester

He should make a technique called, [Quick Potion Creation] in which in his belt is herbs, ingredients, and water to quickly craft potions using his alchemist kit, since it's only 1 potion at a time, if he's quick enough and smart enough, he can create a new potion for the situation every 5 minutes. Limitations: 5 min cooldown, lacking knowledge on potion creation, only 1 potion bottle. In a battle against hundreds maybe even thousands of creatures over the course of days you can run out of ingredients for potion variety and only have 1 bottle. Better to make a potion to help yourself then use it on the environment.


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