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Chapter 19 - The Infested Ruins

🕑 Added 2024-06-13 15:20:08 +0000 UTC

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Ben Bass

TYFTC! I love how Brynn was able to use his new abiliites with the boost from Circa. Since he doesn’t have his physical or mental memories, he still has the same base, instincts and drive that he originally had in his successful ascension to godhood, those plus his fragments of powers are definitely going to put him in good stead. Plus what is his level 1 divinity going to do in his progress, as that is one of the whole reasons for him resetting, to reach even higher levels of power than his original godhood.

Zachary Scott

I'm not sure if this qualifies as a spoiler because I think I've at least gently laid a few pieces to imply this (though I wouldn't say I've come close to saying it explicitly) BUT... it's a bit of a combination of things. 1) These are Iron and she's Silver, so she'd got a leg up already. 2) more importantly, she has an epic class corestone. A lot of Silvers still would have common class corestones. That's part of what she's getting at when she's trying to push Brynn to find difficult situations and push himself, versus coasting up the ranks. A lazy noble, for example, could tag along with big parties and slowly level and then buy ascension tokens to rank up. But they're going to have a really weak and underdeveloped cornerstone. Hope that makes sense and wasn't too spoilery ;)

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! So is Circa just extremely badass and super strong or does she also happen to hard counter necromancers?

Zachary Scott

Thanks! I think I do need to mention this. Personally, I wanted it to be an entirely blank slate, like he was literally just transported back in time to the exact body he appeared in Eros with the first time. For me, I want him to have the opportunity to train and get good at things within the context of the story. I think if he starts off too good at things, it kind of robs that chance to explore it in the story and get satisfaction from it. But I agree, I'll probably try to make a comment pretty early on. Maybe he could even offhandedly mention it when he drops the Alchemist's Kit the first time he tries to summon it back in chapter 2 or 3. Something like... "Huh. I guess I didn't get to keep any of this Seraphel guy's reflexes, either."

EsZeus

Feedback, that could make a huge difference: Muscle Memory. If he lost his memory, did he also lost his muscle memory? Because it doesn't seem like it. If he has such a body, which he can't remember at all, than he still must have his muscle memories. So combat must feel known and easier. Everything that his body knew should come slightly naturally to him. Fighting, and whatever he did before. Maybe include some hints here and there at how he holds the potion bottles. Or how the whip felt good in his hands like he trained with it for a long time but can't remember doing it. Dunno. Just some thoughts and feedback. If you don't want muscle memory to play a role, than it must made clear in a previous chapter by now, too. :)


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