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The Burden of Eternity #4.2

🕑 Added 2025-06-17 14:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Dylan Cole

Ok, I have to admit, that was a pretty epic introductory meeting. Harry comes across as incredibly competent and powerful, in a definitely overpowered but like not 'Jimmy's first wattpad self-insert story' kind of way, he feels and interacts like an actual character and not just a vessel for acting out a power fantasy. It's incredibly difficult to write a character like that In an authentic and engaging way, so props to you for managing it; especially for making the other characters he interacts with or observes feel like people as well, instead of cardboard cutouts for the MC to play with like toy action figures. Looking forwards to the next chapter of this, it sounds like it's going to be another very interesting meeting.


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