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New(ish) Story: A Comfy Pink Cushionblob
🕑 Added 2023-03-16 10:45:12 +0000 UTCHere's another new(ish) H-space Monster Girl story.
One of my current ongoing projects is to take the old H-space Bestiary shorts and spruce them up into "proper" short stories. This is the "Pink Cushionblob" story. In this case the new part might apply more than the ish part. The original was the 3rd in the H-space Bestiary series and barely 1,500 words. The new one is three times that. I've bumped up the background lore and aspects of (this) Bate's character. I also extended the sex scene.
The original was originally in the low priority bucket. The first few Bestiary shorts don't give me a lot to work with and I'd used a pink cushionblob slime girl already in the Volumpula CYOA. (And a story I've had stuck in progress for a long while also features one.)
It was a little fiddly to update, almost being a complete rewrite.
As always with the H-space stories, I'm a limey writing about US soldiers in an alien dimension. I'm aiming more for pulp or Hollywood accuracy when it comes to military matters (don't sweat the details too much and just focus on the story). I do like it to be somewhat plausible (outside of the alien dimension daemon stuff), so let me know if you see anything that's laughably inaccurate with respect to procedure or terminology.
I hope you enjoy it and let me know your thoughts in the comments below.
Comments
Many-Eyed Hydra
I would have made things slightly easier on myself if I'd taken that approach! :D Not much more. I'd still have to do the same research for slang and terminology. It's very much "Hollywood" military and hope the mistakes aren't too glaring. The same is also true with the mobster stories using Koontz. The early stories were set in America, so that's where they stay. :)
Many-Eyed Hydra
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Tempered_Turtle
And here I always thought your stories were with British soldiers.
Noeru
This has to be my second most favourite story from you right after the summer house succubus π it's so good, a scenario I've never thought of before, it's really really hot. The build-up, the finger-pointing at the possibility of surviving.. the pacing is perfect too. Extremely well done Hydra!! >////<
