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HoHH: Coins and Mulligan Tokens

🕑 Added 2021-09-16 12:12:29 +0000 UTC

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Many-Eyed Hydra

I love this. It's similar to what Nyte does with her skulls. My initial thought is that the tokens are a little too numerous and the harlots would be the ones keeping the souls. However, it is a really good way to hint that - as dangerous as the harlots and their rooms are - running away and not playing by The Madam's rules is far worse. If I don't use it for the Tokens, I might find some way to include that - a trophy cabinet in the bar or one of the side rooms, maybe.

Many-Eyed Hydra

I think I prefer Succubus Hearts over Hell's Hearts, but it's a nice one. The main thing I have against Hearts is the confusion with the Bleeding Heart gift, but I think I'm just being picky there. I'm not sure "Succubus Hearts" or "Hell's Hearts" is right. I think " Hearts" would work, with "Hearts" replacing "Coins" in the text. Marker is interesting. Gives me John Wick vibes. Not sure if it fits here as this is a token handed out by The Madam. I might store that away for future game ideas. A H-space type setting where a human survives by earning markers from various succubi and monster girls could be an idea worth playing around with.

Tiber Septim

Just a quick thought but maybe if you wanted to add a little extra mood and feeling to the mulligan tokens, you could have them given out by the angelic barman instead of the mistress, along with a brief "good guy" mini speach about whenever things are at their bleakest and all that. Or you could just copy and paste from fellowship of the ring "Galadriel : [to Frodo] I give you the light of Eärendil, our most beloved star. May it be a light for you in dark places, when all other lights go out." ;-)

Nightshade

For the "mulligan" tokens, why not fated desire? Because you might desire to engage with a particular succubus or desire to change a succubus "wall" event. You take fate into your own hands where your desire leads.

Wakozi

I just had an idea when it comes to the Mulligan Tokens. Just imagine the tokens are trapped souls that tried to escape the House via shady ways. After all, it is mentioned that if a player tries to dodge the Harlots by staying in the bar for too long, or by waiting in front of their rooms for too long, the House is going to do something to them. I think it would emphasize the danger of the House itself if the Mulligan Tokens are actually people that didnt play by the rules, trapped forever inside the coin, being traded away over and over again. Kinda twisted. That would also give you a nice way of describing the coins. Something like: "For a moment you felt the presence of someone. It looked like something tried to escape the coin, but the next instant everything returned to normal." Kinda like Nurse Honey in a way.

Kenneth Eaton

How about naming the coins “Hell’s Hearts”. It’s nice and descriptive, and adds a fun bit of cheek. As for the Muligan Tokens to “Harlot Markers” to signify what they’re suppose to used for, and the fact that they’re essentially traded for favors.


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