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Marked By A Feral Monster Girl đ đ ASMR Roleplay [Horror/Dark Story] [Yandere] [Eating & Biting] [Tapping Sounds] [Headpats & Monster Chu~]
🕑 Added 2025-06-20 00:08:46 +0000 UTCđ´ Dark story/horror theme warning in case youâre not into that kinda thing! đ´
Your life has been pretty hectic lately with work and life stresses. You decide to take a walk outside to clear your head when a storm suddenly hits. With no shelter in sight and out in the middle of nowhere, you find the closest thing nearby: an abandoned cave. Or at least you thought it was abandonedâŚTime suddenly stops and you wake up with a girl hovering above you. She seems to be older but something seemsâŚoff. Her speech and habits seem a bit strange and you canât help but feel uneasy.
Hello Ali cats! For those who have been around a while you know I love me my dark/creepy stuff :P I personally think the best scary stories are the ones that are a bit open ended and allow the reader (listener in this case) to think and come up with their own conclusion.
Having said that, the premise to this idea was: Listener finds an abandoned cave with a feral monster girl living inside. Even though sheâs older, her way of speaking and personality are very âinnocentâ. She hints at having parents, but what happened to them is unknown to her. After various human interactions she thinks sheâs finally found the one (you), she can trust to stay with her.
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alichu
Thanks so much Kai, your comment made me very happy to read because thatâs exactly what I was going for: creepy but in an innocent/situational way :3
Kai Zomei
Ah yes, the other side of the Ali-coded ASMR storylines. I get the impression of her being a Grendel like monster girls: a wild child that not really ape-like. At least we didn't die from this encounter? We just need to remember to visit her regularly. You sold the unsettling nature in that her actions are believably done out of innocence and with no noted sense of conscious malice. Over all, works for being horror genre while still keeping in the nature of an ASMR audio.
alichu
Thank you Kraiden, thatâs exactly the kind of vibe I was going for so it makes me happy that I succeeded! :D I really wanted to push the whole âinnocent/cute but creepy undertoneâ feeling lol. Surprisingly eating a marshmallow after a potato chip wasnât too bad haha! It kinda played on the salty/sweet combo :P
Kraiden
Not sure which would be worse in her case - being abandoned by her parents or... whatever else might've happened to them. Either way, both options are kinda heartbreaking and creepy in their own way. D: Also, first a potato chip and then marshmallows? That's definitely a bold culinary choice. xD Totally sad that all her human friends just happened to (definitely) pass away from natural causes... No red flags there at all. đ But hey - at least she gave us a special little mark to protect us. That's... reassuring, right? She's just so caring! Almost makes you forget how unsettling everything is. Almost. :3 Really loved the eerie vibe overall â it kind of gave me a subtle Skinwalker vibe. That whole "sweet on the surface but deeply uncanny" kind of feel.
alichu
The neck of course, itâs gotta be the neck for eat- I mean, marking! :P lol
alichu
Perhaps the mark was her form of a feral monster wedding ring? Haha! :P
Red XXX00
As long I'm not the menu I'll keep visiting. Also where did you mark your victim? My guess is the shoulder.
Cole Burk
Leave you? Honey I'm going to marry you I LOVE yandere's they won't leave you and I don't have a reason to leave them not like I talk with other woman any way
Releothunder
Oh sheâs so adorable. i will visit all the time with lots of human goody chocolate will be top of the list of things for her to try she might may or may not have eaten some other humans but they were meanys who wouldnât wanna be friends with a monster girl she just needs to be taught to not murder anyone who doesnât wanna be friends poor girl been all alone this whole time doesnât even truly understand what sadness is. Personally in this situation Iâd do everything I can to help her even if her marking me hurts a bit she just wants a friend one day maybe we can teach her and get her ready to live in civilization no one needs to know about what she may have done in the past she was just lonely and had no one to teach her that it was wrong. amazing story Ali I really enjoyed this one definitely as dark as it is with her killing and eating people itâs definitely sad for her being alone but I definitely think this is a story that could have a happy end. canât wait to see the completed art of her the colors you went with for her look great the red eyes and purple skin look really nice the sounds were all really nice aswell who knew skeletons were great asmr props horrible but atleast they werenât forgotten.
Eeveeolite
She's creepy and scary sure, but also just adorable!
