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The Eighth Warden Book 3 - Chapters 16 to 18
🕑 Added 2020-09-22 21:59:43 +0000 UTCThe early release for chapters 16 to 18 is ready! I hope you enjoy.
This release is a little longer than usual because I wanted it to end at a specific point, and as I was writing, I realized I needed a few more connecting scenes to link everything together. I set 12k words as the minimum for a release, and I'm usually closer to 13k, but this one comes out to 14.7k.
I'm hoping to find some readers who can help with specific feedback on these chapters. Do we have any musicians or musical theorists who can look over Katrin's scene in chapter 18 and give feedback on the use of musical terms? I'm not a musician, so I'm not sure how close I managed to get.
Also, when I need names for the story, I sometimes select a region of the real world and pull names from there, then modify them slightly, just to give some sense of consistency for that area. Do we have any native Greek speakers who could look over some of the place names I'm using? I had to pull translations for individual words from Google, and I don't know how well those words fit together. In the story, it's not the actual Greek language, of course, so they don't have to be a perfect match, but I'd like to make sure I didn't say anything too silly.
And any other feedback would also be welcomed, as always.
Thanks for reading!
--Ivy
