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Updates
🕑 Added 2020-01-29 09:15:13 +0000 UTCHi folks. I've got some updates to share.
First, I posted revised versions of both the Ch. 10 to 12 release and the Ch. 13 to Interlude release. The changes are minor, and you probably won't notice them on a re-read.
The biggest change was to cut down on the info dump in Ellerie's scene with Sarette in Chapter 13. They still have the same conversation, but hopefully it sounds a little more natural now. (The details that I removed either aren't important to the story, or can be added in more naturally at a later date.)
In Chapter 11, I added a line indicating that Razai is wearing a disguise that looks like herself but with her rune hidden, because it would have appeared shortly before her scene.
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Second, for the Book 1 fifth draft updates, I've now posted the revised versions of chapters 11 to 20.
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Third, I added a question-and-answer channel to the Discord server. We're not really big enough to schedule a question-and-answer session, but the channel gives us a spot to collect questions for me about the story. If they don't give away spoilers, I'll try to answer them, and then people can visit that channel at any time to look through them. We'll keep any further discussion in the on-topic channels, so the Q&A channel can be reserved for its purpose. If you've linked your Discord account to your Patreon account, you should have access to the server automatically. If you don't want to link the two, send me a message and I can provide you with a Discord invite.
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I'm currently outlining the second half of Book 2, and continuing to revise Book 1, so I anticipate it will be two to three weeks until the next chapter release.
--Ivy
