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Tenebroum 15-16

🕑 Added 2022-10-31 14:41:14 +0000 UTC

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D. Winchester

Hah, we'll see. My next goal is to do some map making. One, because I like maps, and two, because you can see the region of the story is both growing and becoming more important, so I want to nail that down, but if I ever had the art budject I would like to commision some dark etching/block print style art of the lich and the tower.

jordan renz

If it keeps going as is, I see many good things in this books future, like some sort of hard cover, with pretty illustrations.

D. Winchester

Awesome. I'm glad to hear it. I'm trying to keep a mix of broad strokes where the story moves forward in slow and steady ways combined with important, dramatic, moments (such as the mage stuff you previously pointed out.) Sort of a punctuated equilibrium so that it still feels grounded but doesn't get too slow. We'll see how it works out!

jordan renz

Now that was some well done, and well put together world building, and I loved everything about this, lots of connections to what the characters are saying and what is actually happening, in other words lots of showing and telling going on here in good ammounts.


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