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Chapter 773

🕑 Added 2024-06-03 14:47:01 +0000 UTC

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Ph34r_n0_3V1L

The Chanters and soldiers were left behind to keep the Shadowgate on guard. -> This reads awkwardly; 'to keep guard on the Shadowgate' reads better.

Nicole Hicks

You know, logic dictates that the guards would most definitely stop and question them before they could leave the Tower grounds through the gate because their group is just distinct enough that the guards would have remembered them coming onto the grounds through the gate. Which means, because they hadn't passed through the gate to come to the Tower, the guards would not remember them and would therefore stop and question them. Which means they would need to come up with a plausible reason why they were at the Tower that the guards would believe and not question them further on it and let them pass. And, it would be prudent to come up with that reason before they left the Tower. And, of all of the group looking outside the alcove window, I would think Zara would be the most logical one to take notice of that detail and point it out to the others. She is the one with the most experience with pretending to be multiple people and spying. Which means she would be very good at thinking on her feet but also good at noticing things ahead of time that could be a problem that would need a solution to be made before the problem is going to need to be dealt with. So, the fact that she, at least of all of the group, did not pick up on that makes no logical sense based off of the characteristics and personality of the character.

Amathew2

That’s an unexpected couple but it also makes sense in an opposites attract sort of way.

Captain Nuclear

Oooooo, darius and zara, sitting in a tree....


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