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Chapter 933

🕑 Added 2025-06-05 12:02:17 +0000 UTC

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Mitchell Meyers

Swear to god if this shit somehow wakes up the sister and turns her as an enemy again ill lose it.

Joshua Kaluf

"person as if shed been hewn roughly" need apostrophe in "she'd"

Joshua Kaluf

That's why I usually just kinda ignore all the heights anyway. Anything that feels mind-breaking, I just skip so I don't lose the immersion...then again, I read a paragraph at a time instead of a sentence at a time, so maybe that's just me.

inkaral

...When writers start throwing out large numbers for height it breaks my immersion in the story :/ 20 feet tall is like a 2 story house. And yet he's interacting with normal sized humans and such without any issues. Also wondering how he fit down the sewer tunnels so much. Unless that's a typo. But imagine a 2 story tall gator man, size and weight, interacting with normal sized humans. Including taking a human sized bowl of soup and a "chunk" of bread. Cut his height in half and it's much more believable, and not immersion breaking imo. I enjoy nonhuman races, but then (other than literal giants) jacking their sizes to the extreme doesn't make sense when interacting with normal humanoid sizes.

Apollo

But hallow made a great point about being sent back.

Apollo

Always love the different POVs

Deonte

I wonder if the whalemaw can get out of the void there 🤔

Patrick Sullivan

Tftc! Good stuff 👏


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