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Chapter 602

🕑 Added 2023-06-12 12:00:06 +0000 UTC

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The last segment feels stilted, Felix just states he’s alright, followed by another assurance that he’s alright, neither being prompted. Maybe Doric asking if he’s alright would help and rewording/replacing the second statement with the beginning of a question asking if reattunement needs to happen often would help make it seem more natural

Kevin McClelland

Thank you for the chapter!

Ben Cooper

I truly enjoy the character of Beef, but I am looking forward to Felix meeting a more mature Unbound. I'm also curious to see if the gnome was similarly summoned from an intense, potentially life-or-death situation, and I would love to know what inspired his choice of gnome upon being summoned. Here's hoping they meet up before too much longer.

Aaron Schwartz

It’s dwarf time! diggy diggy hole!

Travis Estes

Tftc


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