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Chapter 576

🕑 Added 2023-04-12 16:31:54 +0000 UTC

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Aaron Schwartz

Dude. The hunger in his core doesn’t feed on Fried Chicken. I think he knew he’d I have to fight something impressive enough to feed it, in order to gain control of an entire other territory for his kingdom. So yes, he knew food was coming. He just didn’t anticipate it as soon. You do have a point about the Tenth pillar thing though. However, while the whole did battle epiphany thing is kind of played out in this genre, I do wanna understand why he is so much crippled with indecision about this. It’s a huge decision. And if he fucks it up badly enough, it’ll kill him.

Brent Thomas

FEED ME!

Gardor

"His Hunger had been quite silent recently. "You’ll get food soon, promise." "Yes. Food Is Coming." "That’s what I said". Felix rolled his eyes. His Hunger was a lot like Pit in many ways—one track mind. "Hold tight."" This willful...thickness of Felix is and has been my least favorite part of this novel. He won't be able to understand (or even think about) what his usually silent inner demon is saying until the very last second, as the "food" arrives. He also won't take thirty minutes to pick his tenth pillar, despite having nothing else to do while travelling to the giants, deciding it's a better idea to train his iron manipulation. Why not save it for a life and death battle in some dream realm created by an antagonistic god, that'll make for much more exciting reading. It's the fact that he's always a slave to the plot that annoys me, a Felix who does clever things most of the time but will dismiss odd phrasing to make a better surprise later.


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