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Chapter 566

🕑 Added 2023-03-20 13:50:45 +0000 UTC

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Gardor

Oh that's a good point, the random interlude to the giant super strong woman in the woods somehow not catching up to the much tinier much weaker gnome gave me whiplash and distracted me, but how did we get from "let's talk with the magic illuminati Master and her arrogant minions about geo-political crises" to "better get a quick workout in at my danger gym".

Rishain

I love the story and besides some really bad things I find it to be very well written. However Reading this chapter made me have to go back and look to see if I miss something. It feels like there's a huge section between Zara and Felix and her people that is missing. Unless that really really really short meeting that we got is all we're getting of that. so many on answer questions, so many talks that didn't go anywhere, it's almost like that meeting didn't happen or if it was completely pointless. I don't know and I guess I just feel like this part of the stories getting swept under the rug and rushed are hidden maybe just written in a poorly laid out way

Nice prose flow. That stuff slipped off the mental tongue, all sleek-like that I swore it was the literary equivalent for butter. That and I am hungry and this diet is making me swear I can smell my neighbor's French toast through the foot-thick, cement walls.


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