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Chapter 557

🕑 Added 2023-02-27 21:13:40 +0000 UTC

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SiI3nt

Well a dude's going to be a dude and a primal dude is the best dude

Vortozan

Darn, thought there was one more. Firstly, thank you for the past 40 amazing chapters, they were great as always. I’d also like to point out that so many 3-4 out of 5 star reviews of RoyalRoad baffle me. Your writing style is beautiful and evokes imagination to my mind better than any other story I’ve read in my life. You’ve literally brought to life many many different locales in this world from frozen wastelands, to deserts, cities, towns and endless different depictions of Gods, godlings, powerful monsters, day to day civilians, crazy religious fanatics, primordials, long dead races, a dragon and the worlds history itself is complex with mystery and depth in abundance. We also have the fact each of their core spaces are worlds of their own, and Felix’s is an entire solar system/developing galaxy. I can agree with their comments on the fighting mostly consisting of throw abilities at everything without any skill or thoughtfulness but at the end of the day every skill is interesting and ever evolving enough that I look forward to where the story takes us. My rating? 6 or 7… out of 5, so yeah, note that your story is two notches above what I’d say is a perfect story. Cause you made your own style, it was done to perfection and then some. Thank You for the read!!!!! - Vortz

CringeWorthyStudios

I swear someone needs to lock them in a room together at some point and not let them out until they figure things out.

The Grand Moose

Id enjoy a solo Vess and Felix adventure or maybe just them and some legion. Kinda want that relationship to actually move forward. Also could be cool to do a selection of solo journeys for the group. Maybe some go back to garner the Gherelden Hills for Felix, maybe Evie goes North with the Giants to affirm his rule. Could help push their individual powers. Also thanks for telling us what happened with the Naga, I was super curious. Now I just wanna know if Atar actually told Alister (or anyone else) about the Urge in him.

John

It’s really good

Amathew2

How is that series, it’s next on my list?

GuyWhoReadsALot

It's about time they moved forward with a relationship. As Jake the Primal Hunter said, sometimes a dude has to be a dude.

kinglemur

Are we finally gonna see something happen to pull them closer together


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