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Chapter 697

🕑 Added 2024-01-03 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Noah

Thanks for the chapter but I can not wait for the constant and ever changing POV shift to slow down some. For some reason book 9 is a slough to get through because this is just me personally, but some of the POV changes just kill the pacing for me in certain parts.

Noah

Last mention they were getting sucked dry of mama I believe and are currently incapacitated on the ground in the undercroft. The hydra when it first formed or was forming dealt with those dragoons first and then proceeded to attack everyone first. So the are either still down there unconscious and still breathing but severely weakened or more than likely we just outright killed from mama drainage and fallling stones

inkaral

How long until they find out the dumb Dragoons decided to loot areas they're not allowed to go to, and this thing woke up because of them? I just feel no character has pointed out "where are all the dragoons right now?" Edit: As a follow-up to this issue, is the author going to just LET the dragoons escape? Like really, do we NEED another group to betray the MC group/faction and get away with it? They already have enough going on that they're trying to deal with, both here and back in their home they're trying to build. After a certain point, and a certain number of betrayals, it gets annoying if they can't spot it coming. Also, the "commander" has been agitating for disobeying/betraying them. Wasn't someone supposed to be keeping an eye on him, and them? Too many series have betrayers who get away with betrayal, and it gets annoying reading it time and again...


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