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Chapter 683

🕑 Added 2023-12-04 13:00:04 +0000 UTC

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SubtleStubble

Small inconsistency, don't monsters start to disperse into smoke once dead? It would be a quick sentence to infer they did the quick cuts to preserve the bodies or a sentence on forgetting and losing some of the pile (s). Regardless, excellent chapter as always.

Omy Sadat

After all he's been through, calling Beef a boy would've been an insult imo. Young adult at most but man is still more acurate than boy.

Nicole Hicks

The way to transporting something that big is to cut it apart. Maybe use it's shell as a container for transportation, kind of like what Hallow is doing with her mushroom hauls. Good chapter but you called them men in that last perspective shift. Felix referred to the three guys as men. They're all male but none are men. Archie would be categorized as an adult male Delven, Beef as a young adult male Minataur and Pit as a young male chimera. Pit was never a man so referring to him as one of the "men" isn't really accurate. Of the other two, the only one that used to be what you would refer to as a man is Archie. He used to be an adult male human (i.e. a man). Beef was still a child of 12 years old when he was brought to the Continent. So, no referring to him as a man. He'd have to be considered an adult for that. So, yeah, none of the three are in a state that would constitute Felix or anyone else referring to any of them as "men". It might be a bit more accurate to refer to them as "the boys" or "the guys". Probably of the two, "the guys" would be best. Referring to them as "the boys" is an insult to Archie while more accurate for the other two but "the guys" is gender specific while being age vague and more age encompassing. But, obviously as the author you'll do what you want.


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