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Chapter 203

🕑 Added 2021-03-26 04:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Sean T

Some feedback, not a fan of the one dimensional dumbness of villains that feels unnatural and how things kind of go their way for a bit. Frustrating to read even if it's some kind of weird set up that eventually works out for MC. Just feels like forced coincidence and forced obstacle. This comment applies to this chapter and also earlier parts of the story.

ben regnard

I'm guessing it corruption via oaths, at in part. If there is no element of outside influences then honestly it'd strike me as poor writing.

Imran

Thanks! So, Dabney and the Guilders know that the monsters are under them, and they decide that now's the best time to start a fight and cause seismic damage...they aren't the brightest bunch, are they? Unless it's Teine's oath that's making them do this, in which case I just feel sorry for them.


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