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Chapter 178

🕑 Added 2021-02-03 06:12:46 +0000 UTC

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Alan

Felix is an adult, mentally in his late twenties. Why doesn’t he approach Vess?

Grevis165

I ship Felix and Vess :-)

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Always happy to hear that, Turora. Thanks for reading!

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Thank you, Andrew!

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Thanks JH! I try to avoid repetitious word usage, but things creep in without me knowing all the time. I appreciate the heads up and I'll look into it when editing.

J H

Thanks for the chap. Just a note, you use the word "much" a lot....too often I think. It might just be a pet peeve of mine, but it feels like a really lazy and awkward word when used in ways like "she owed Evie much." I think it's better used as an adjective, and even then there are usually easy ways to reword a sentence that sound better. I hope you find that helpful in your editing!

Turora

Love the story as always.

Andrew

Thank you!

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Thanks Sofie!

Sofie

Thank you for the chapter!❤️ Serious —> series lease —> leash

Imran

Thanks!


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