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Chapter Eighty Two - 082

🕑 Added 2020-07-15 19:46:14 +0000 UTC

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Beowulf

Greatly enjoyed!

Grevis165

This was a neat chapter! I really liked the descriptor for cresting the flock of harrowings like a hill, awesome imagery. I got into The Last Airbender again and the ships made me think of the fire nation ships from that show. If you plan to include more machine-magic stuff in the story it would be really cool to see magic-powered, hand-held harpoon cannons, grappling hook launchers, gliders, and their larger aloop- and ships counterparts. Your story has SO MUCH potential, and I believe you're a good enough writer and storyteller to incorporate these things. Food for thought :-)

Monty

I’m pretty sure I saw that maneuver in “Serenity”.

Imran

Thanks!

Andrew

Thank you!

Scott Frederiksen

Awesome!


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