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Chapter Eighty One - 081

🕑 Added 2020-07-13 03:15:03 +0000 UTC

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Diego Rossi

< When he glanced town at himself, he had a dizzying sense of dislocation > it suppose it is meant to be "down" and not "town".

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Honestly, Niko, I am jazzed about getting our boy back to to Continent as well.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

You know I was going for a certain misleading effect from the Maw. It does not seem intent on putting forward the truth to Felix. BUUUUT on another read through, this doesn't read the way I wanted. I'm editing it to say "Because you ruined it!" The Maw was defeated. That is what we know. The state of its existence within Felix is still an unknown, though its been posited (by Felix) that it is "insane."

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

I've seen a few episodes, though if I'm being honest I don't remember much.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Fixed!

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

I always appreciate typo fixes! Thanks.

Turora

Nice chapter! Quite the tense sneaking about.

Turora

“The hallways was empty.” -> “The hallways were empty.” (If Felix’s room was at an intersection) Or “The hallway was empty.” (If his room was in a single hallway and not on an intersection)

Turora

“But it doesn’t really make much sense.” -> “but it didn’t really make much sense”

OrigamiKnife

Did you ever watch Farscape? Because the maw is sort of giving me a Skorpius vibe

Sanairb

"That's because I'm dead, no small thanks to you." A few chapters ago she was going on and on about how she couldnt die, even if she was now in the void. So whats happening here? Is she dead? Is she alive? Is she in-between?

Corwin Amber

'Nothing to saw' saw -> say

Ziggy

"Nothing to saw to her infuriating face" I'm not quite sure what you meant to put here but it didn't work out lol.

Niko

great chapter thank you. glad to hear that the void arc won't be too long. i have been enjoying it so far but i am interested to see what is going on back on the continent.

Andrew

Thank you!


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