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Chapter Seventy Eight - 078

🕑 Added 2020-07-07 02:59:16 +0000 UTC

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Alan

So he just met this extremely violent bunch and just chugs the alcohol even though he knows it will cripple him?

Ray Burns

I did enjoy this chapter a lot... but I feel this was a big deus ex machina. I mean, Felix is in 'the void' and he randomly runs into a bunch of pirates with some shield that can fend off the maw. Not really believable.

Turora

"Ogres are generally known for their huge large reserves" -> huge or large, not both is what you meant I believe.

BladeTytan

Since movement is based on Willpower, I’m assuming communication is done similarly to telepathy. At least that’s my theory on why it’s in italics.

Ziggy

Did you purposefully change how speech is formatted to represent some quirk of the void? It's a little odd to read, as presented.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

I did! Thanks for the catch.

Corwin Amber

'He pointed town before' town -> down (i think you meant this)

Scott Frederiksen

Woohoo! Pirate pals!

Andrew

Thank you!

Patrick Short

I hope the pirates escape with him.


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