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Chapter Seventy Three - 073

🕑 Added 2020-06-25 02:36:06 +0000 UTC

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Andrew

Thank you!

Ziggy

You've painted a good picture with several of the scenes. Very visceral and gross and awesome. Both the part where he's struggling to down the draught, and as "Lhel" shoves her arm down her throat. If you wanted to add a little extra to the draught scene, you could toss in how he feels and tastes the blood filling his mouth from the glass shard in his tongue. Small detail, but anyone reading that wouldn't be able to help but picture it even more.

Kapelteta

Going to have to do some interesting justification of why he doesnt end up a crazed mini version of her at the end of this... unless that's what you are going for and we are in for some sort of time skip where he loses his mind and we time skip to a place where he is somewhat recovered but in his insanity he let the maw escape... in which case please just dont. That trope is pretty overwrought. On the other hand if he does somehow keep her trapped here who/what becomes the antagonist at that point? You set the bar pretty high with the embodiment of hunger/destruction.

Althaelus

Well if he's actually gonna do it, that's some pretty pimpin foreshadowing. After all he bit her progeny, why not the mother as well.

Scott Frederiksen

CONSUME!!!

Imran

Thanks!

Great chapter. I'm okay with the cliff since I don't need to wait too long. I'm oddly hungry now...

Morog T Tiny

the author has successfully convinced me that buying ahead on this site is a bad idea. thank you. #so tired of cliffs

Mr. Bigglesworth

Without a Cliff, one cannot look into the disturbing depths of insanity inside us all...

Dominic French

Ahh the cliffhanger lol thanks for the chapter

Mr. Bigglesworth

<b>Resistance to Cliffing has gone up by +1</b>


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