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Chapter Seventy One - 071

🕑 Added 2020-06-19 20:59:06 +0000 UTC

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Nate

what's up with next chapter? kinda funny how the status updates getting annoying but here i am, anxious over the delay, wanting them back.

Dee

Hot take: Lhel is related to the big bad on the bitter sea and tied to the endless hunger plaguing our dear protagonist. Even if I’m wrong, looking forward to the conclusion of this arc!

carebear90

So...I guess she was the one that assigned his Race and Omen for him? It would make sense if she noticed the arrival of an Unbound and decided to "hack" into the process, so that she could get a shot at a "Nymean" champion instead of the giant that was allready on his way to her.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Thanks!

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

:D

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Thank you! That's so great to hear.

Nate

Great chapter.

Grevis165

Oh sheeeet! This was epic! Love the descriptions constantly changing - good job revealing her magic to the reader and seeing Felix slowly understand

Andrew

Thank you!

Scott Frederiksen

So hyped. *Vibrates excitedly*

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Thanks for the feedback. All of this should hopefully be cleared up soon.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter!

Ziggy

Ohhhh shit. Lhel is the bitch from the dreams! And she wasn't some goddess or something that brought him here, just some opportunist that noticed he arrived. I dig that turn of events.

Ray Burns

Great chapter, and I'm loving the build up we are getting, but I am getting a bit confused with all the different 'sound entities'. - We've got the 'system' which is the pure sounds. As far as i know the system hasn't interacted with Felix in any way beyond his status page, and we have no idea of its origins. It isn't good or bad. - We've got the Mother who is somehow able to create her own sounds and these have been drawing Felix in. She has also been speaking to Felix in his dreams? I don't remember that? - And we've got the 'hunger' which comes from the mythic monster in the acid sea. Is the hunger somehow also related to the Mother or is it all the mythic monster?

M.S.McGowan

Last couple of chapters have been really great writing . Feels like the story is stepping up a gear. More please

Imran

Thanks!


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