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Chapter Forty Seven - 047

🕑 Added 2020-04-28 04:39:15 +0000 UTC

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Nasser

Sorry but i'm cancelling my subscription due to me not standing Magda.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

lol I should describe it better, I guess. More like an oval with two pointed ends. I'll edit that in.

Mortgenstern

I wonder if anyone realizes that the Nym were the ones to cause the Ruin however long ago. Or at least were involved in it.

Thaabit Rivertree

*Or they could be reasonably suspicious without those qualities

Thaabit Rivertree

I'll be honest, it's just not pleasing seeing the main character form his first earnest and real relationships with people who constantly suspect ill of him. I'm not sure how you'd get around that, cause logically, they should be suspicious. But the way they talk about him and suspect him comes across as very uncaring and ruthless. Basically I'm sure they could display reasonable suspicion without the constant willingness (even eagerness) to hate, commit violence, and use him if they get the chance. I don't quite know how to describe the quality I'm thinking of, but it's like they never actually considered him someone worthy of respect. He is to be dealt with until they can figure out how to use him or kill him. I suppose this stems from the fact they feel shanghaied into including him in their group. But it still comes off as overly ruthless, for lack of a better word. This is something different from just trust vs suspicion. Losing those qualities I mentioned earlier doesn't mean they trust him. They could be just as suspicious without those qualities. Basically I really don't like Harn and Magda and the reason is entirely the way they talk about Felix in private. On the one hand, I enjoy seeing him interact with the others his age. On the other, I hope he separates from Harn and Magda soon.

BeepBoop

Well, he is looking more and more at the fog. Depending on how long they spend in it, he could learn the analyze obscuring parts. Lets say, as much time as it took him to get this level.

Sickul

Vessilia is a noble but not a royal, I mean I guess it's possible she is part of the line of succession somewhere but not a princess. Also they think Felix is also a noble, or at least Magda does. But she seems to call the shots.

Kevin Ramos

On the one hand I get it. Felix is an anomaly, so it's fair to be cautious. But on the other hand, you have shakey ground to stand on since your endangering royalty for personal reasons.

lockx

"would could I even"

What does a two pointed star look like...?

"Compromise the mission" not "comprise"

Sickul

Does you still not trust me? Do Damn, Nym are pretty rare then. Interesting.

Scott Frederiksen

Love the story. I'm really curious what reactions will be like once his race gets out to one of them. ^_^

Sanairb

Ita kind of like using a health potion to cure a stubed toe. If you want to introduce what they look like, wouldn't it make more sense for her to pull it out, look at it, and decide to save it doe an emergency?

Sanairb

Isnt it pure stupidity to use one of the last of her stamina potions for training when they might have to fight their way back out of there?


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