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Chapter Forty Two - 042

🕑 Added 2020-04-17 05:03:58 +0000 UTC

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Scott Frederiksen

Just binged all this. Eagerly awaiting more! Thanks for the awesome character/world so far. Very FFIX blue mage vibe here and I love it. Especially the Title name that imparts the insights. 👌👌👌

Scott Frederiksen

I believe the website l ancient entity who sensed sorcery in the towers a chapter or two back. I infer that she/he/it was invisibly observing and was surprised by the nym race upon inspection? Hoping Vvim will become a better mentor material after observing him more and witnessing him almost saying something he shouldn't to the adventures? Could be way off base though seems like a possible path this lead up could be taking. 🤷‍♂️

Sand Bear

They are going to find out about him one way or another. Might as well come clean now

Fl1pstre

Who is Vvim?

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

You've got a very good point. It's a balancing act with revealing some but not all of the information. Since our main filter is Felix, who knows little about the world or system, there ends up being a lot of questions. But events still have to happen. I appreciate the warning, though; comments like this really help me keep things in perspective!

Simon

I'm still wondering on how this will be handled too.

Ray Burns

Thanks for the chapter, really liking the series. I would say to be careful thought about how many unanswered questions you introduce. Or scenes without the proper context to understand. In moderation they both can be good things but too many can frustrate the reader as they might feel they are unable to properly follow and understand the story.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Still makes no sense why he would reveal any information like his race, skills, or anything else. These people haven't proven their trustworthiness in any substantial method and have shown outright suspicion. Added onto the fact that nothing shows him being anything other than a human before his race change, it's mighty odd he wouldn't take into account the basic fact that humans hate things that are different than themselves. He doesn't even seem to care that there is a non-zero chance of being murdered simply for asking the wrong things, or showing a treasure he doesn't know he has. To say nothing of being reported and hunted down for his ability to see through the Grand Fog Illusion. A character that was super careful and took every advantage to kill mere grubs is now throwing any sense of care to the wind, yeah, making no sense here.


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